Very enjoyable read thanks
I've been anxiously waiting for Freya's story, and we're off to a great start! Can't wait to see what Alle has in store for us this time
Nice to read i love it
Good story but the grammar needs editing
The sensory details in this passage are INSANE. Let me just... the heat. 'The sun beat down mercilessly, the heat so oppressive it stole the breath from her lungs.' You can FEEL it. The yellow clay road, barely wide enough for two people, wild grass growing unchecked, the gnarled tree roots. And then the shade of that ancient pine tree on the massive rock—Tao Nanfeng sits down and the cool surface hits her skin and you just... exhale. The author also drops these little architectural details that make the world feel lived-in. Tao Nanfeng notices the soil composition, remembers her father teaching her to sketch sites, recognizes the bearing capacity of the clay. This is someone who was trained to SEE the world, and now she's in a world that doesn't care about her training. The wild pheasant scene! 'Its long tail feathers shimmering with iridescent colors in the sunlight'—and then the hawk swoops down and steals it. That moment of pure wildness, the men chasing it, the shriek of the hawk, the discovery of twelve eggs in the nest. This isn't just background. This is a world that breathes. The blue cloth draped over bamboo baskets, the square aluminum lunchboxes, the whistle at five o'clock. Every detail grounds you in this time, this place, this life.
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I like the story. The book preview looks interesting which makes me wonder what the story is. It gives me a feeling of wanting to read it more until the end. I recommend this story. I did not regret spending my time reading this. I loved it.
Every chapter repeated itself.
The sex scenes took to many chapters.
Need to check typos.
But overall it was a good book.
Can u please make another story about the reunion of the main character coz its sad to know that they end like that
I really love this book! keeps me coming back for more!
It's a lovely book. But continue the book. It shouldn't end soo soon. I thought they will have a baby together