It's a fresh approach. I quite like it. Hope the writer continues to post it regularly. Can't wait to see the new chapters. Thank you for the great work.
I don't know about y'all but this story is way too interesting, however can the author please be more accurate in his updates...I come in peace.
It’ sure that’s you make a lot of mistakes and typo but the story is still interesting, I like your style and I hope you’ll try to find a way to settle those insignificant issues, keep continue and I don’t you’re keeping me waiting til I finish those chapters to upload others… you god me hooked already and be careful with the remaining chapters good job.
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Review after reading 19 chapters.Grammar: 5/5. I have no complaints whatsoever about the grammar of this book. There are close to zero errors and the sentence structuring is top notch. Overall, a 5/5 for me.Story: 5/5 So far, the story has been intruiging and captivating. They are no cliche tropes and the story is comedic as well. The characters actually have personalities and dont feel like blank slates. The interactions are funny and nice to read. Overall, the story so far has been refreshing. Straight 5/5 for me.World Building: Spot on is the only phrase i can use to describe the world building of this novel. Its detailed and realistic, 2 ingredients for any novel with excellent world building. I feel like i actually have a direction when reading the story. Another 5/5 for me.The MC’s are excellent in my book. The twins have personalities that compliment each other and I can actually feel the brotherhood between them.This story is simply a gem. Read it if you want to read something new and engaing. If the author keeps up the good work, I can easily see this story becoming one of the best, if not the best, cultivation novels on this site.
This is totally my type of novel. Just a place holder review .
Writing Quallity: goodUpdating Stability: don’t care Story Development: Slow, boring, repetitiveCharacter Development: Horrible. Main character constantly goes against the “cold blooded and ruthless super soldier” personality given to him. World Background: Nothing special. Overall: A book with good grammar but a horrible idea, horrible development, a horribly written main character, and a generic world background.
it seems he knows what he's writing about. good.
I can see why people could like it but not for me.It gives harem vibes and major blatant saving damsels in distress. The system even forces him in first few chapter to keep saving girls. eh as if there's not enough of those already.. You could read it regardless, enjoy
I've already read "Rise of the Demon God
Great novel, its definitely one of the top 10 on webnovel.nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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