Very cute and straightforward! It focuses on the couple and moves at a super fast pace. I love the fluff. There's not much drama or conflict, which makes it a breeze to read.
I love the main character (MC); he's so cool and cute. The male lead (ML) is also adorable. The MC takes the initiative during their intimate moments, which makes him seem pretty badass. They really suit each other. I also like the side characters.
Actually, I'm glad there isn't much drama about the MC's so-called family. His past life was really sad, and he deserves a peaceful life. I'm glad he found love and is living the life he wants.
The core narrative of this novel wraps up within about 20 to 25 chapters. The protagonist displays strong decisiveness when dealing with minor antagonists or supporting characters. The remainder of the story revolves around his effortless rise to fame, accompanied by a subplot focusing on cultivation. As for the romantic relationship between the main character and the male lead, it doesn't particularly captivate me; while they are individually compelling, as a couple they lack chemistry.
I’m back trying to reread this novel. The story is pretty good; but around chapter 180 the translations are worse than MTLs. But according to the comments, the translations get back on track around chapter 250 or something. Anyway, here goes… again!
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starting my journey on 25/4/24 and my exams gonna start from 2/5/24 hope i will finish it few days before my exam
Bro...sigh...it's discontinued!
Although the storyline might be somewhat predictable, I appreciate how the female lead (FL) doesn't let it bother her and remains laser-focused on achieving her objectives. The cliché of the male lead (ML) suppressing his emotions resonates well in this context, and the translation captures the essence of the dynamic effectively.
My initial encounter with Qian Shan Cha Ke was through "The Rebirth of the Malicious Military Empress," which, despite its flaws, provided quite an enjoyable read. Following that, I ventured into "Marriage of the Di Daughter" (translated via DeepL) and "The Rebirth of an Unlucky Concubine." The author has a talent for crafting engaging plots and face-slapping scenes, which piqued my interest in exploring their other works, despite occasional annoyances like recycled plotlines, excessive verbosity, and graphic content.
Being a fan of revenge tales, I decided to give "Rebirth of a Star General" a try after it was translated. Despite my earlier criticisms, my curiosity got the better of me, and I machine-translated the rest with DeepL. To my surprise, this novel stands out from the author's previous shortcomings. There's less sexual assault and gore, the protagonist's character differs significantly from others, and the male lead, while similar in some aspects, isn't overpoweringly so. Although the author's tendency to excessively describe his beauty persists, it's not as prevalent as in "Malicious Empress."
The romance is slow-paced but has a strong foundation, and the MC-ML relationship evolves beautifully. The emphasis shifts from intricate schemes to utilizing combat skills and military strategies, which makes for a fresh approach. Face-slapping scenes remain satisfying. The main character's personality is straightforward and compassionate, unlike her predecessors, although her incredible intelligence raises questions about her past mistakes.
While the author explores different territory in this novel, there are still instances of unnecessary padding and lengthy, uneventful chapters. A significant reduction in length, perhaps by half, would significantly enhance the reading experience, in my opinion. Nevertheless, for fans of the author's previous work or those who appreciate revenge stories, "Rebirth of a Star General" is worth recommending.
In summary, this novel shares the same length issues but offers a less brutal narrative and a focus on military progression, which is a new dimension for the author. The romance develops gradually but not tediously.
it's fiction, chigga
What a great first chapterI can already see that our MC Is stupid and likes to look around for trouble.
I actually found in on telegram.. if u want the. I can give