From the creator of Reincarnation of the strongest sword god, I guess that's lucky cat, you should give a try, it had gives similar vives to his previous book.
i just wanna say, "amazing and fantastic." i like the story about video game, from zero to hero and the story combine with fantasy and a little bit scifi.
Nice story love how it's goingExcellent outstanding and greatLove the FL ???????Keep up the good workAnd also more chapters ???And another thing, Please do continue!!!
I’ll give myself an honest review. I know u have a lot of work to do before this becomes popular (if it ever does)Thank you all for reading and I hope to see your honest reviews here for feedback.
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So this would be a littbe bit spoiler for those who haven't read it,The concept of the story is quite interesting, instead overpowered or average mc, this mc however, lower than average... his suffering like without end just because being weak even weaker than a person without Qi. I think his honor and lust for revenge that would likely become the core of plot pushing-wheelThe story in my opinion is a bit rushing, especially first two chapters. I think in the beginning the readers should be given how the mc's life in the family that despise him like show them the kind side of the mc and how he sacrificed and protected the weak, in order to create a strong bond with the mc, so that when he eventually get banished, the readers would get the feeling of sorrow and empathy.Then the writting, I think it's the punctuation, especially lack of coma and then the "tone color" of the dialogues to give the characters, charachters.Overall the story is unique even tho this is the first martial art-based novel I read. With the time, you'll eventually become a great writer!.....Sincerely,~ Houraji Ballare
Chinese name: 史上第一密探 (First secret agent in history)Status: Finished in 382 chaptersHaven't read it, will wait for Qidian - will they pick it up, or drop it
Novel with a good start. Main character grow in is mentality. I can't wait to read more.Only one thing, I hope the MC will not improve is cultivation too fast and too easily.
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Muy buena!!! Es una lastima que tarde tanto en sacar un capitulo. Vamos que se puede!!!! Vamos que se puede!!! Vamos que se puede!!!!!!!! Vamos que se puede!!!!!
why....... was it kick out of selection with some other book just to add even more trashier story literary out of nowhere we have three diffferent stories added while ohters kick out?? i thought every story will have the change to be voted on