Very promising, I enjoyed every chapter and looking forward for more.
Hmmm I like the pacing of the story not too fast or too overloaded.I enjoy your novel.'''''''Writing and World and Character good''''''
It started off as a good story, but I feel like you kind of just skewed off from the original story before he went into the high class dungeon became completely crazy for a bit after that, I just feel like the story kind of was all over the place. I feel like if you rewrite it and stick to the story that you were doing before everything got out of hand it be a better story.
This novel will surprise you with hidden depths, chapters down the line. I have to admit the writing style takes some getting used to--it's MC's perspective, a reckless, fearless (literally in his case), headstrong young man trying to mend his relationship with his (physically stronger, more handsome,better)younger brother. The flavor is very shonen-y and some questionable topics (abuse, harassment, misogyny, inherent sociopathy in some people) are handled rather lightly.And then we get further into the plot, delved around the reason MC wished to turn back time: his brother'sawakening, estrangement, and death. It's both good and bad for me because I'm not really a fan of the very game-esque lingo and mechanics, but the sprinkles of information is tonnes better than infodump, while also working to further the plot as MC discovers the hidden side to whatever's going on in his world
NOTICE: Story underwent major editing to deal with glaring issues! Thus all previous reviews were deleted regardless of score. BUT story is still slow-paced, multi-perspective and has worldbuilding and lore that may seem boring for those only seeking for the smut chapters.If you wanted instant harem, instant smut, then this is not for you.
This is a pretty bland story where all he needs is Spirit stones and he'll learn everything. It's not very good as a series tbh and it's not that good to read due to its monotonous tone.
Its one of the best novels I have encountered. This is my second review and the story just keeps getting better with each new chapter. If previous first few chapters were Golden Hidden Bosses then these new chapters that keep piling up the mysteries and fun when reading them are Diamond Hidden Bosses.1.Story Development so far had been Super interesting And OP. There is heaven after heaven. And it seems that there are people much stronger than Sho Tu residing in the dark ring. Many new characters get introduced amidst this journey of Shi Tu that even 300 chapters ain't enough to properly introduce them all. Story Stability Doesn't much matter at this point as just yesterday I read chapter 303 which is a Treasure trove for people who didn't read this novel yet. I wish I could erase my memory bout this novel and read from beginning chapter. Chapters are released every day to which m really grateful to author. 3. Character Developement: What can I say about this? A billion year old mc developing himself? Find out about it yourself! 4. I think this is a hidden trove hidden at the deepest layer of Earth that even Earth and Heaven are afraid what would happen if it gets leaked outside. This is just that good novel in my eyes. No lies.
This quite an interesting read. There are many things you didn't expect to happen and in the end, it always kept you on edge, making you want to read the next chapters. Writing quality is good too.Great Work!
I know the story is just getting started but I'm so curious as to what will take place. So far I like the characters and I can't wait to see more of the main character. Furthermore the description of the scenery and the world makes me feel like I can picture everything. Looking forward to the rest of the story please update faster!!!
Excellent writing skills, exhibited great grammar! I sure can't wait for this to be on the top list of undiscovered, definitely worth the read!
Decided to write 2 comment. If we assume that mc is on hardest diff lv then this novel is low trash quality copy of 'tutorial is too hard" but instead of tower you get normal society. 1) Author informs us that MC is not really good at anything other then gaming. 2) By the time school best players get to 2lv and get invited to special group for best players. MC is nearly catching up on hardest lv to group lv. 3)Most players are playing on easy/medium lv, developer lv of difficulty of mc is not just 1or 2 stages higher but over 4(easy-medium-hard-very hard-hell-... don't remember if more). 4) The 1floor =tutorial is based on jumping and mc is able to clear it "slow-by author opinion" but the reality is he did it super fast. He who is on god(developer) lv difficulty and he who has 0exp with sport is able to clear this tutorial and catch up to others who play 4lv of difficulty lower then him , and get admitted to exclusive group of elite players. If you ask me this novel is golden spoon and wish fulfilling by author. I SUGEST DROPPING IT!
Sloth has always been one of my personal favourites when it comes to authors on WN and I have the firsthand pleasure of knowing about his books from him. This book is another example of how good his writing is and I can't just wait to see more of it.