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This novel really can't be seen as more than an amateurish fanfic.Ideas are copied, events rushed, the usual clichés and tropes are there, being its bread and butter... and unfortunately, the translation needs some more work, too.If you have nothing else to read, you can give it a try, but I'd suggest to first check out the novels from which the author "took inspiration" from, as "Perfect World" and "Sovereign Of The Three Realms
Saw it at number 1, tried reading, stopped reading because its basically a trash novel without any substance.So weird that it even gained so many followers.
This is a cooking novel with a system. The story is very light-hearted and the system doesn't make the MC OP. From what I've read, this is always the case with Chef systems. It's necessary to let the reader's know that cooking requires lots of practice, experience, etc!!!! ? Anyway, I hope this novel gets chosen! I want to read more ?
Amazing novel I was looking forward to a novel like this for a longtime ???????????????????????????????????????
MC is stupid just like everyone in his world but not a little stupid, no, he is dumb as **** and the story development is as dumb as him.The only intelligent girl is described as a character annoying as ****.The other character are not developed and it seems that there are no emotion beside "angry" in this world.If you want a good novel go for scholar system.The novel here is a cheap scholar system novel without the good part
absolute unit of a story, it has basically no flaws and I repeat no flaws!writing quality - easily 5 stars one of the best I've seen on this site and even in general, its basically professional levelstability of updates - it's not really that stable but I think this story deserves a full five starsstory development - again one of the best I've seen on the website, the story is structured and written beautifullycharacter design - again full five stars, the story so far gives us more and more about characters and I don't know about later characters but the current one is designed perfectlyworld background - the world seems full of things we don't know yet which gives you a thirst for more knowledge about it like the MC, the world itself is basically a normal world with a few tweaks here and there5 stars ez pz no cap, read it I usually don't make such long reviews I encourage you to give it a try
Get back the new chapter release of 3 chapter per day........Otherwise make long chapters....What are you doing translator...We want more and fast chapters...
Don't stop writing this! Even if the contest is over keep going this is so freaking cute I am dying from nose bleeds! ???? I need more Alex and his awkwardness!!! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone bring you down.
This novel is great! My only complaint is the slow release rate! Why is it only 12 chapters! Every other novel released at least 50 chapters on release!
Hi ,This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected], then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story.SincerelyShirley
This novel is just at the beginning of its story but its quite good i do recommend it dsgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
