This novel is simple garbage....i have never felt so frustrated reading a novel in my life...by the time you read up to chapter 12 you will understand
Excited for the upcoming chapters, the story is written in a way that makes the reader think a lot about the upcoming events what will happen ? and why ? , where there is a lot of mystery and suspense, and it also seems that there will be many characters in the future in this novel - Author, you did a great work
One of the three recommended books to read. Hopefully this book goes to the voting pool. For those who like to read strong MC then this is for you. I'm not sure if MC can be considered as OP(Right now he can be considered as such, but the people around him aren't really experts, so not sure if he's really strong compared to experts), but he's surely very close, so for people who don't like that, then this is not for you. What I actually like about this novel is that compared to usual mastery system, this novel's system doesn't take that long for the skill to be useful. Even if the skill is only level 3-4 it's already strong and quite useful, then 5-6 is OP at his current situation since the people/enemies around him aren't really experts. Really hope people won't just pass on this novel as this novel is quite interesting.
This feels like the classic Webnovel and I’m all for it! Although I do love a bit of switching it up, your work falls into the commercial type that is great for mass consumption. There isn’t much I can fault about your work. Keep writing!
The switching of perspectives written from first person for Alk and Lake creates a feeling a dissonance in the writing and detracts from the immersion. I find myself consistently wanting to skip all of Alk's chapter's because it feels a less interesting story that is delaying the development of the plot. Sure Alk's part seems to be world building and introducing new characters but he feels hollow as a character and not much is known about his intentions. I can't feel any excitement for it because I'm imagining a cardboard cutout of a goblin that can't think for himself. Did not feel like it would be the kind of novel to use switching perspectives and doesn't seem to benefit from it. I really enjoyed the earlier chapters before Alk's inclusion but I do not feel excited for the after 60ish chapters seeing the frequent swapping of perspectives.
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the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.the story is not bad, very entertaining.
the book is a really nice book. but its a pity it only has 191 chapters and the book has been on hiatus since 2022 November.
There’s typo rarely, but development is really fast and this is very good thing, because story need to be fast(first 50 chapters are the most important, if you want to have fan base, of course),sometimes drama and many plots, dynamic fights, more powerfull realms, more heh, you know.I giving 100% of stars, just for you.Good luck, Author.
While this novel is currently in it's beginning stages as I write this review, I only have one word I can use to describe it.Superb!The storyline is a great mix of what we know of in usual dungeon novels alongside new and fresh ideas concerning coexistence between humans and other races. The POV is also very interesting and refreshing to read. I can already see the cu*khold waiting to happen.Aurora is already my fav, though MC sis is a close second due to the... milk... heheI'm sure there'll be good lemon with MC's girlfriend too. I can't wait!In any case, I look forward to this novel. Well done, author!
you just know a book is going to be good when it has such a name. I was immediately drawn by the unique style of writing and the way you explored human psychology. it was quite awesome.
I really enjoy Buddhist stories they are so versatile and yet not so different from expectation. It's really too bad the other login Buddha novel is no longer updating that was really good too.