plot twist over a plot twist
Impeccable, the choice of words was splendid. I think the plot was what made this novel into something great. Sci-Fi was a difficult genre and with its quality based on your first book, then I must conclude that you are a talented one. Good luck in the future! I hope more readers will come and enjoy your work. ?
Great story. Intense and compelling so far. And clearly it will only get worse… better (positively). It’s so well written, it sparks the imagination and controls the readers emotions. The lead is intriguing. The author is doing a great job. A must read.
I'm new to WN as one of my friends recommended me to read this story. This story looks good but it has some flaws in its writing like the change in tense. Except that the writing is detailed and the plot is also really good. based on my enjoyment I would rate it as 5. The author can improve their writing and I'll be waiting for the upcoming chapters.
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would've liked to read more but from chapter 6 onwards it's locked so not gonna waste my time and money incase it turns out to be bad that's all I have to say
Whats happening to webnovel.
Once upon a time, I looked forward to my Fridays because of the great books that came out every week. As time passed, the quality dropped slowly, but as Webnovel already had all the good books, this was understable. At some point the gems will run out, and you will have to wait for new ones to be made.
But nowadays, the quality of the books webnovel are putting out every week are absolute trash.
Absolute garbage. mindless plots, tropes and cliches that have been recycled a thousand times over. I would have to go back months to find a batch of books that had a character with the slightest depth to it.
Please Webnovel, give us some good books.
You can see the plot coming from miles away, the dude sucks at parenting and the daughters will make enemies left and right, then he will go and try to make peace giving gifts and such if that does not work (it never works) the face slaping will beging, just pass this the plot is a never ending groundhog day
The beginning started rather smoothly and nice but then it's a rush in turning the Mc into an OP Character with lot of holes missing key parts for the storry sadly also nothing new compared to other storrys
very nice
Why do i feel like this novel will gave racism later on?
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gawd this bad the plot is bad, the translation is bad, using the word cooldown instead of channelling, (xia xi is channelling his ice nova magic) the author also like to forget what he type or is it the translators fault e.g every rank has 10 levels in the early chapter then a few chapter later the rank disappear and only level is used,( even xia he got to level 15 when he should have been upgraded in rank and start agaim at level 1)