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I love this book so much ??. I only wished it was complete, it's so addicting.
Nice story bro!!! the plot was nice and also the characters. Can't wait for the next chapters.
pretty good good character development the story can get confusing at times but i still heavily recommend this book to people looking for 40k fanfics
This is absolutely one of the best books in Webnovel. I highly recommend it to fans. Keep up the good work author.
"Oh," was all I said when we got to the gym. I wonder how I haven't fainted again, but I knew I was on the verge of passing out.
All in all the idea is interesting. The origin of abnormalities is mentioned very well. Further the setting is well defined. What bugged me was the paragraphing issue. Over in all, the novel will do well as long as the author grows with the idea.
This novel is just insane.Really confusing in the beginning.The first few chapters may have scared of some potential readers, because it is just really confusing and the mc seams to be simply evil.But it all gets better, it is awesome to progress in the story and learn more about the mc etc...The pacing is awesome.The only thing i think of as a shame, that we cant see the mc progress through the early levels of becoming stronger, he is already stronger than the most and i would have loved to see him grow from 0 to 100. But I'm definitly going to keep reading the brilliant story
Decent wuxia novel. Kinda similar plot to every other novel, but has its quirks. Interesting in quite a few aspects. Character development and personality of mc is quite different from the rest of factory made novels. Unexpected twists and plot in unexpected times (which it should be). Pretty decent overall. Just a bit improvement needed in translation and Grammer. Pretty good quarantine read. Hope it continues.
A new novel - Eastern fantasy. There are pluses, there are minuses. This is an honest review.The quality of the text block, you can give 5 stars, is easy to read, almost everything is clear. Interestingly written, even fascinating.Updates are ongoing, 2-3 chapters sometimes. If the author manages to maintain this pace for 2-3 months, then he deserves praise. While he succeeds. Bravo! 5 stars.The development of history - is dynamic, but sometimes there are jumps from one topic to another IMHO of course, 5 starsBut the character’s character is not clearly spelled out, it is not clear what his character traits, what emotions, who he is at all, what kind of person he is, what he lives with? 4 stars.The world - it is not described in detail, at first you can’t understand where the actions take place, in what time, era, how this world looks like? What is special about it? But, somewhere in the middle of the 15-20th chapter, the world is partially clarified, simply by pointing to oriental fiction. Such worlds have already been described in a dozen novels of a similar genre. Therefore, also 3 stars.Plus the novel, reading it is fascinating, sometimes intriguing, although sometimes reading the beginning, the end can be predicted.The quality of writing is good. There are some original points, finds.Cons - The novel is replete with cliches inherent in the stories of this genre. Originality, thoughts are not always shown, there are compilation of plots.In general, I liked the novel, I read it regularly, included it in my library. If you have nothing to read, and you like the genre of oriental fiction, not too fans, then a very good novel to read.Thanks to the author for his work! Much has been written, and with a good text block, updates are regular without interruptions, it costs a lot. Really cool!respectfully
So far, this book is remarkably well composed. I love the story plot and how the characters are being described to the fullest. I'm really enjoying the story and will definitely be reading more of it. Great job author.