Tunic01
That was a good start- a cheat download ability and then the author was eluding that this was the beginning of the era of spiritual cultivation. Somehow, people didnt know to cultivate using the Qi of Heaven and Earth and I was really interested how that will turn out. Author did a complete 180 with the tournament arc. The system was comepletely forgotten and everyone is now a spiritual cultivator, completely abandoning the previous cultivation ranks and introducing the spiritual ranks.It seems like the author got tired of thinking original ideas and decided to copy paste Martial World tournament arc. Since Martial World didn’t have the download system, it was abandoned. A lot of these stories aren’t original by any means, but the author could have really made the tournamnent arc their own by actually using the system.What a disappointment.
I was originally intrigued by the synopsis, as it was done in our world.However, after reading the initial 40 chapters I have come to the conclusion that this book was utter ****.I could have lived with the fact that this was so full of cliche's, the thing I could not accept was the blatant racism and constant dialogues stating china is the best and everything else is ****.It's okay to have national pride as everyone is proud of their countries and their traditions.Nobody except the Chinese can stomach this ****.
don't drop this.This is a gold........................................................................................................................................
This reminds of one of the statements of a character in arifureta light novel or webnovel was it...... It was said there that if there was a camera man there at their summoning it would be the strongest class...??????????????
I really like this story so far. I’m hoping it gets voted, so I can continue reading it.
Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.
Pretty good 8/10 i have read all 150 chapters and they are good its not the best novel but good one to read at your spare time. Other than that starsuper is kinda stupid he could have used better tech and united earth to create better world but didnt and just let humans do what ever they wanted
Great Story and would recommend to anyone that's look for a solid plot and world build. The story is also executed properly putting you into a loop of wanting more and more. Definitely a 5 star story.
Review for Chapter 51-60:Dude! The sprinters are crazy! And they're still evolving?! I think they're more dangerous than the ones in the other countries.We met the people that Kaley talked to before and it caused friction. A LOT of friction. MC handled it beautifully and you'll know that he isn't a goody-two-shoes. It's like a mirror, what you show him is what you get. Be good, he's good, be an asshole, he's an asshole.Good job as always man! Keep safe there, I remember something happening near your place.
It’s classic wish fulfilment fantasy but that’s the fun of it. Although it’ not particularly imaginative it’s very entertaining so far
after chapter 400 i dont even know what story am reading anymore, am confused....
wishing a great year to all my readers thanks for following smitten I made sure to upload from chp 66-70 read up enjoy leave reviews
