I kinda like the novel for some one to make this novel they need to have a good mathematic education or something of that kind so I give it 4 out of 5 ????
hey every chinese novels contain faceslapping incidents, it shows that they didn't even believe their own fellow citizens and foreigners in the Chinese novels will have rational thinking.they are showing that their own country people are brainless idiots???.atleast other country citizens believe their own fellows somewhat, but in china according to their own novels I think nobody has rational thinking. brainless monkeys???. I am not saying these ,their own people are writing like this.DON'T PUT FACESLAPPING.DISGUSTING
author, your story is very addictive!! I'm sorry I read it so fast...keep up your great work!The story gets a lot better after the first evolution of the mc, and man, I can't wait to see the harem progress. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)I apologize if I wrote something wrong, I use google translate??
well ... at this point i can with no guilt say i rather read some chinese bs thats been translated with google translate then this story ... since machinetranslation is atleast not giving me a headache
Need improvement in all aspect...beside explaining the level of cultivation...author should've explain what is yang cultivator/yin cultivator in early part of the story...and dont make the male mc more stunning than female please...dont make it sound like yaoi novel...its disgusting
This is not good don't bother
It’s better than most novels but wouldn’t say it’s amazing.There’s something off with Ren’s personality. It’s like he’s bordering a control-freak edgelord while trying to be a calm, composed, and relatable MC. The dichotomy should be the major personal struggle of the novel but the appeal of it just falls flat.Also if you’re expecting classic Alchemy, then you’d find little of it here. World building could also use a bit more flair as it is lacking and grammar could be better but that’s just a minor issue for me.
very detailed...Nice one
This is so interesting, I was hooked at the first chapter already.
Lots of cliffhangers, Reina is stronger than she looked. Nice one author, lovely writing skills.
owe my please write more soon
Love this book