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OOOO, Bebe you got this!She's charming and proud! I love the MC. I mean, I--ok lemme admit it, I'm so envious to the FL >
it is good
I haven't read this story yet. I was looking at the reviews and many people are complaining about NTR. I personally do not enjoy it so I dug a bit deeper, and I find that all the people saying so are gaslighting liars, and there is no NTR. even the top review is someone who hasn't read the story (not like I can say much) complaining about NTR. This is ridiculous. I hope this reaches the top of the reviews so people see this before all the lying.
I originally was really hoping to like this story but unfortunately character development, editing, story development, and world building are completely lacking. The character goes from very ruthless (understandable thanks to his background story), and then instantly when he meets this woman who has a similar story he falls in love and his personality changes (and hers for that matter). I don't mind romance at all but this author made it forced and quite unbelievable. Even giving excuses saying "Just because they professed their love doesn't mean they're a couple" but then immediately in the next chapter they're calling each other lovers. That flirty behavior and constant groping and kissing and moaning is just completely irrelevant from the story it seemed the author was trying to write in the beginning but then it turned into a bad romance novel I'd find in my grannies book shelf. Work harder on editing as inconsistencies can pull people out of the story. Such as: This amulet curses people to lose 5% of their power, but then a couple paragraphs later its now 50%.I really really really wanted to like this but I just couldn't continue. My advice stick to the kind of story you want to write and don't make excuses or try to pander to all the fans on this website. Be honest with what kind of story this is, (which at this point I'd call a romance fantasy slice of life with an OP MC) you'll get the type of readers that love that kind of story and get less bad reviews and angry comments.
I watch your career with great interest. um... I kind of need the review to be longer huh...um...so how's your day been... mine was good...bye.
not review but a fun fact? the 4 arms guy in the cover is the faction leader for the necrophages in endless legends, its a good choice because one of their trait is that they literally dont talk with food, basically no diplomacy options are available, they just battle and eat everyone like any good devourer should do
the story idea is pretty good, but why can't I see much difference from the original novel ?? I even thought that this was just a copy paste of the original novel because only Mc's name changed
It looks like someone review bombed this novel (a bunch of low ratings posted at the same time). It's a really good novel so it sucks that happened.
This qi.. zzzz.. why they always copy someone else work.. i read this novel at ww first.. it's a good story about celestial emperor son whose reborn as dandy mortal in a backwater kingdom.. and now here qi just copy paste their story.. are they have no shame?
Boring.. no comedy / romance .. author didn't use many opportunities to bring a little flavor to the novel.. mostly bland with political undertones .. which are showcased in verbose paras.. not intriguing incidents this novel is something for the readers to keep going through the boring chapters .. but translation is good
Un verdadero desastreMal desarrollo de la historia, introducción forzada de personajes, giros excesivamente forzadosUn consejo prepare bocetos, ponga objetivos claros, tenga claro cuáles son los objetivos que quiera lograr con su novela porque de verdad esto es un absoluto desaste
