I've listened the entire book its very good would not recommend to people who are easily influenced by words, but its a really great book the fights are legendary and the meaning of this story/novel is so, i don't know how to explain it (Spoiler) he becomes immortal emperor or heavenly emperor Huang ruling all ages i would love to see what happens or if there's a part 2 to this book will definitely read
You have such a great story going. I'm enjoying the build ups and character development. Keep up the good work, but I do encourage you to go back and make some edits for the weird Grammar and "Where's your capitalization?" freaks.
The beginning of the story was quite intriguing. I'm already interested to know what would happen next with the characters and the plot of the story. This book has its unique potential. Overall, it is a nice read. However, I would suggest that you proofread your work. There are several issues with typo errors, grammar and some sentence structure. It is minimal compared to the quality of the stort, but still it would make your book more appealing.
I really like this novel. Its a wuxia novel rather than a xianxia novel (Its more based on mythology and stuff like demons than cultivating into godhood/immortality).The world of the novel is about demons trying to invade the human world, and humans were forced to join together to fight the demons. There is a surprising amount of unity amongst humans when faced with a bigger threat, which is a fresh breath of air from the constant betrayals and evil people that seem to be the norm in most chinese novels.Also, there haven't been any overused tropes such as arrogant young masters, which is really nice.Overall, I'd strongly recommend the novel. The techniques and cultivation system in the novel seem interesting, the MC's character and personality are not boring/annoying to read about, and overall the novel is a nice fresh breath of air from the 100000 novels about some random MC becoming immortal while encountering a million arrogant young masters along the way.
- World background is the same as every other novel out there.- MC is blind and acts without having any substance to back his actions ( ex: if some one cuts you on the road with a car twice your cars size [like a truck], do you try to hit the truck just to satisfy petty emotions?) <- Well the MC would!- The author forces a lot of the interactions the MC has with the outside world (For example a side character will do something just so the MC can react to it in a certain way [aka brainless side characters]).MC and world building are unoriginal and just horrendous in general. I gave 5 star to uploading speed since I don't know what the speed actually is :)- While not a lot the translator also messes up names once or twice.
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Unbelievable, how can this type of novel just keep being chosen, over and over again, the same script.
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