Incredibly dark and grim story, I can't wait to see what more the author has for it.
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This is a great book so far I am glad I decided to check this book out author and I hope you update on this book more I love it and that is all I have to say goodbye
I read up to chapter 15, it’s an ok story, the author has said it himself, he is new to writing, it is very apparent, the bad guys seem to only know how to be lecherous, and that’s all it’s about. The MC trains to get stronger to beat up rapist scum, after the fourth time it gets old. There is some foreshadowing about the expansion of the world with new interesting things soon to come… If I’m ever bored enough I’ll pick it up again.
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It's a good book for being 15 chapters in. the only problem I have with it is that,1. grammar needs to be checked2. when name the skills, please just hit enter so it's not a mess to readAside from that, it is very, good just author
i started reading this thinking it is an average gaming novel but the potential and way it is written make me believe it can go up to the level of King's avatar,but on the other hand grammar need a lot of work,use grammarly and write on Google docs it will help alot,am rooting for you and cheering ready for more chapters ??
I can never be thankful enough for all your unending support for Picturesque. At the moment, I'm busy and unable to update the story yet but more uploads are coming real soon!
At first you think that the story is bit slow and the description is provided by the author seems bit too much but after some chapters you see the same at everything.in every scenario when the people are bad mouthing the female lead there are same feeling in each and every chapter you get bored easily....The male lead always harass the female lead but she doesn't do anything even her thoughts are not clearly described by the author....
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This is a gem in the 'rent-a-friend' genre that brings a smile to your face with a clever set up and loveable characters.The general writing quality is extremely high, and personally I enjoyed the style quite a bit, barring some space for polishing.Time is spent in the early chapters building up the character of Leo, though some of the scenes chosen for character building might feel a little inconseuquential, which the author understandably has to walk a fine line between slice of life stories and log of everything that happens to one's day.Speaking which, the pacing does remind me of the pacing of the first fate visual novel, where we start the story with one character then cut the perspective away and follow another for the next few chapters until they meet again.Keep at it!
So far, its been an amazing story. A story that also inspires and motivates the author.There are lots of lessons in this book, ranging from love, patience, strength and focus.Its a book to read for everyone..