Some typos at the start but the story so far for me is top and I can see he or she is tryings lots. Never seen something like this, the character isn't emo and is pretty funny after he gets his emotions back. AND ITS NOT EXTRA DRAMATIC... love the work author keep it up!
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(Oh man should probably keep my distance away from her haha.)
It's a fun premise, the story so far has some potential, it is also good for a laugh, but it desperately needs an editor. .. ..
This novel features a promising protagonist: a smart and calculating MC. What's disappointing is that the MC refuses to kill his five disciples. However, this doesn't mean he can't weaken them by severing some of their limbs or reducing their cultivation levels. It's too absurd for the MC to simply sever his relationship with his disciples then not owe each other anymore, especially after giving them everything and saving them from childhood tragedies. Considering his extensive experience with betrayal it doesn't make sense for him to let them go freely with fullbody even give them some kind of bodyguard.
I think most of us have read enough apocalypse and revenge novels already but this novel is simply mind-blowing! In my opinion, this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. This story has a lot more potential and positive content. I'm glad that I found this. I think I definitely stumbled upon a rare gem here.Not only we have romance during the apocalyptic world, but there are also game abilities and kingdombuilding involved! Yes! You didn't read it wrong. They are all in this novel!There were also some scenes that I cried a lot and there were some scenes that I felt really happy. Most reborn novels have just only narrated the MC's past life experiences but here it was portrayed beautifully through the MC's perspective. I even got emotional at some points when I read it.I highly recommend this novel. It is so worth it !!!The only thing that I wish the author to fix is to release a longer chapter and more frequent. The author, please keep writing this book!
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Shameless Author Reviews. Naturally an author has to review his own work so what can I say. I will just be writing this xianxia its pretty cliche, if that's not your cup of tea, what can I say.
No se entiende que le pasa al mc, porque está tratando de cambiar lo que vio en los recuerdos, porque no recuerda. Es tan confuso que me dio asco tratar de seguir leyendo lo dejo
Seems interesting I'll add it but won't read till it has about 12 chapters cuz thats normally where apocalypse series get interesting. Also screw 140 characters -_-