Read this novel years ago on royal road. Hope you update this as it was great but does need to be proof read. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXD
Hi Author,I love the story it's very fascinating. I hope the grammar lapses gets fixed and no it's not just changing tenses but also point of view.e.g; when the main character is talking about himself as a 3rd persons point of view.
Enjoyed the novel for a while, until it was repeatedly pointed out that the author and main character are sorry homophobic and have an unhealthy view of sex. Out of several sexual encounters there is one that is consensual, and it's not with a real person. Dropped it after it was stated that the main character thought he wouldn't have saved a character because he thought they were "a gay".
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It's refreshing and its funny. I like how light hearted it is and I enjoy the main character's thoughts. His decisions surprise me and that's what makes this story so enthralling. Keep up the good work!
This was a very interesting book until somewhere near chapter 40 when MC personality does a complete 180 and just starts acting like a arrogant brat that just murders people for no good reason and threatens to wipe out there family. This is super hypocritical too because the whole story before that he is ragging on the “supposed” MC of the world he is in then instantly becomes the same person. This killed the book for me.
i've wasted my braincells.all the characters are idiot, if i can give this a 0 star, I would do it..............................................
Only read 10 chapters so far.Too much filler. Very slow pace. Just not me.-----------------------------------------------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Story's so far is very well written with a believable progression and realistic life for the MC. Would recommend for anyone who's looking for a good system novel to hold you over until any new updates.
I read this novel in MTL till ch 150 overall novel is good but there are few problems.1) MC is way too OP compared to other characters( no one in his city can even be par with him even after ganging up) still he tries to show he is weakling and often gets into problems2) author's sense of time is completely messed up MC has a full-powered mythical grade beast in just 19 days( according to the author) after transmigration but just by counting the number of days, he mentions it is definitely higher than 30 days.4) story doesn't go into depth about any of the beasts' original civilisation5) even after 150 chaps there is no sign of local intelligent species ( this problem is according to me just make the story dimensionless )
this is just pure Chinese propaganda, they even made Trump a 'ccp agent' did the chinese author really think that every country has the "ccp" system
Because it is Lin Fan i Up-Vote !Go The Strongest System Lin Fan is now everywhere!But it also got some similarities with Library of Heaven's Path!