If anyone haven't noticed it yet, the background is certainly a sharingan , and by the fact that the MC looks like gaara , maybe the author is a NARUTO fan???? Hahahahha Gonna try this one.
Pretty weak story with horrible characters.Mc gets random power ups and passes every impossible fight just by thinking of his sister and getting plot armor.Wierd disgusting ****** relationship between mc and his 10 years old.Constant flashbacks with no relevant info in the middle of a chapter for no reason.
This is dropped? I will re-review again after you continue this storyTq........................................................................................
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my prognosis is to leave this novel alone, the synopsis is a straight up lie and the storytelling is bland and forced. the content to him getting his power up is skipped, his first loss is skipped. the storytelling principle of show dont tell is simply ignored. small spoiler-> rough plot directionthe female lead is shoved to the mcs arms almost instantly, without any real content except her having a system which forces her to give herself to him against her own will. this seems like a not so much thought out power fantasy.i do have to say that the synopsis really sounded exciting, so this is a huge disappointment...
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best xianxia parody, just make sure you endure mc antics at first he seems like idiot but in funny way, there also reason for that, grammar and writing quality is great, he also not hypocrite
Gomi has some awesome books.
the book is currently little slow but overall consept is awesome you should know I am also want to become writer in future it will be without
It’s a good story but I can’t help but want the author to concentrate on farming more. Plus why does song hi have to keep reminding the mc about the farm book . It makes the MC seriously look dumb. Plus there are too many systems it makes the protagonist lose it’s appealing point. Protagonists are suppose to be special right. It a nice story line but I don’t really like how the characters are.
The story is fantastic. Ich would Like to read it all my day.It's so intressting. It is just the uploding.But that's just a little problem. Thanks for your work.Keep going.?????????????
I loved the story so much!! But I'm really sad that it's a short novel. I liked the character descriptions and background. Keep you the good work. I hope you publish a new novel of yours soon!