As the story develops it gets more and more interesting, hope to learn more about the characters e see their relationship grows over time. Keep up the job :)
Definitely not recommend, this have a lot of unnecessary details that just are the joy of few and the annoy of the rest. the grammar is so-so with chaps that are just awful, the plot is medium good but with a enormous lack of realistic flow. Is fantasy yes, but the Author put real martial arts that lack reality instead of make a fake one that fix in the fantasy. Then the girls plot flow in the novel... pfft more cheap cr*p, tou in tou is a waste of time.
Dont be in a hurry to rush your chapters bro... Enjoy writing your story as ive enjoyed reading it also... Keep up the good work and have a nice day....................
This novel currently is the best xianxia novel i have ever read. The MC is not only smart but also wise, he is not a busybody that always want to involve in other people matter. he will not intervene if some demonic cultivator kills innocent people as long as that demonic cultivator not targeted him, he will not lift a finger and only watch or escape. and he is also not a psychopath that will kill everybody he meet. i would say he is just a logical person that trying to survive in the cruel world of xianxia not someone who trying to be a hero nor a demon. if you like "lord of mysteries" and "A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality" then you definitely will like this novel.
i love this kind of genre because it remind of the famous sci-fi ... sword art online or SAO........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This story is making me lose brain cells, it goes premium at ch 9 despite it being unreadable. Nothing makes sense in this story like at chapter 1 they author just copy pasted the entire wiki of a nunchuck like wtf
I wish there are more chapters to read. Been searching for novels like this forever a good read for leisure .. it can always put ya into sleep with a good dream
a wonderful story about someone truly growing from pain and torment he has decided that no matter what the consequence may be wether death or pain he will hold to the lifestyle that he's chosen and the principles that he believes in truly respect the character great book and it's got some funny moments too
Sounds neat
Damn dude, this has a very awesome grammar, also a stylised writing, which makes for a very interesting reading (it kinda feels like a "real" book, doesn't feel like a poorly translated novel) there's only one chapter out and I'm already a fan of this one and I totally hope for it to go very far
The story is interesting, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
Let me just start off with saying I only read to chapter 16. Ignore this if that irks you.Ok, I was first attracted to this novel due to its description and it’s genre, video games. I was expecting an international mercenary dunking on some kids that are touching guns for the first time. But the MC acts nothing like an experienced mercenary let alone one that is considered “international”. Whatever that means. He only has great aim and descriptions of being prepared and calm-faced. And the enemy players are pretty generic.Next, the game features. Everything basically costs money. There’s that feature where if you attack first, you turn yellow-named. And killing makes you red named. And it’s takes 3 days to turn yellow from red and 1 day for yellow to white. And that’s with 1 pvp point. And dying causes you to lose a level, a chance for an item unless you are red named which it then becomes 100%, and getting locked out of your account for 12 hours. Even if people are charging at you, unless they hit you, you are technically still out of battle.Next, story. It starts off already in the game for probably a month. We don’t get to see the MC in his world or transmigrating. He’s also already got fitted in with his identity. He has some connections and apparently lives somewhere high up on a building. Then some game stuff and he fights and offends one of the largest mercenary groups within the game with 10,000+ players. He’s a solo player btw so far. Which is 16 chapters.And there’s my review, I wasn’t invested enough to keep reading and seeing if this was better. So you can ignore this review if you were looking for a review with more credibility from more chapters read.