A lot of stories with similiarity with this one. So borong with bo varietas. For me peraonaly, this book good but not good enough. ............
Story is good and is sent up to really develop in the future, however I’m 35 chaps in and the mc isn’t using his reincarnated advantages. Like I get that he’s 5 yr old but he should be trying to do more. ie read, sign contracts, etc
Its good novelBut still grammatical errors occurred often.Mc personality is a downer.
It’s a good book, but the grammar puts me off a bit. The MC is a Gary sue (super handsome, genius, fighting expert) and is contradictory so that’s kinda bad. I still like it, and would continue to read it if it got proofread.
This Deserves an oscar... The character designs and names and how the author was trying to compare real life celebrities to characters was a out of place, but don’t misunderstand im really tired of those long chinese names that is hard to spell and remember compared to names in the novel like michael,gaya,claire and more is really making it easy to swallow. Tbh except that part everything impressed me. I think if you gave it a chance by reading 5-8 chapters you wont stop until you finished ?.
Story's so far is very well written with a believable progression and realistic life for the MC. Would recommend for anyone who's looking for a good system novel to hold you over until any new updates.
Since this is book 2 we can carry over some of the previous ratings.WQ, SoU and WB all get top marks from me, Updates have been plentiful lately since this used to be a 3 chapter a week series. I rarely get pulled out of the story due to writing issues so the quality is there and the world background seems deep.Both SD and CD have similar issues and thats due to some characters being seemingly forgotten, for example Princess Shan and Tianshi's sister, she disappeared from the narrative for so long that I've forgotten her name, to be fair they were mentioned in one of the last SC chapters.Overall this is a good series and the second book has a chance to elevate it.
Holy crap this is good, so good that it keeps the end of my hair stand up. thanks for your hard and beautiful work besides i really like this novels ;can't wait to read more of this novel.... I should have had waited until there is more chapters..... I like it too much♥
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What you have so far is good! The plot is interesting. Love the way you started off with your story.There's a few punctuation mistakes and grammatical errors but your story is still understandable. Keep up the good work!
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I instantly fall in love with this booki hope the author will finish it a soon as possible I'm looking forward for that to happen.As for the character I really want them to be lover