wow, just wow. how exactly did you come up with this, because I want to share your muse. LIKE SERIOUSLY HOW ARE ALL THE WRITERS ON HERE SO FREAKING GOOD! ?! !;?! ?! !! ?! ?! !
this could be a good story if it went off the description but it doesn't . the start is inline , guy goes back before the world goes crazy with a system......but does he spend his time getting ready.. nope. there is very little system stuff or training. it devolves into a cliche filled young master type mc trying to manipulate women into his harem/slave system . an example is he says how after the world changes how there is wide spread starvation from lack of food so what does he do next he becomes part owner in a restaurant and then wants to start a chain of them. mc takes a poisoned ninja as a cooking disciple then gives him a system and talks about giving him his cultivation style since none are for sale in the shop but he doesn't then sends him to Africa to kill rebels . (later they are for sale somehow even though he didn't upgrade the system which he is scared to because he doesn't trust but he has been running around like an idiot trying to get friends/slaves/comrads?.. the story starts in a dark place, betrayed by family and friends and the killed . he is mad, angry and wants revenge , ok a good story start but what we get is a guy that makes drama every day chasing women and it gets so convoluted is silly, there is a kidnapping scheme that goes on for chapters that just makes you skip, read a few lines of each chapter to see if it's still taking place if so just go to next chapter till it was over. this mc should be training and getting xp every day but he doesn't, well he fights a lot but he just knocks them out .. but later finds out he gets more xp if he kills them lol this guy is supposed to me a 1k yr old emperor that has climbed through mountains of corpses but he just knocks people out that attack him... if you are bored and want to read a wannabe Japanese /Chinese cultivation story with chan this and chan that (only from the mc not anyone else) and just want a harem story go for it otherwise it's a waste of time even for toilet reading .
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Mc is one hell of a crazy guy. He’s not hesitated at all when he committed suicide (meaning, it may trigger some readers, so please consider this aspect of novel before reading - just because Mc can disregard his own life does not means the other should follow his example).The author really creative when he utilize Mc’s power, cause Mc to be able to do something similar to teleport. This guy is also crazy enough to kill himself so many times to gain point or grid skills. (Well, consider his past life, it is to be expected for Mc to be a bit of a bonker). Any future plans to created a bunker in the apocalypse are quite promising, but sadly because of the disappearance of the author, we are unable to see it come to fruition.
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in the first arc the MC becomes a nobleman's servant, in the second arc the MC becomes the babysitter of a naughty ***** girl with a fetish in principe, but I can't take it and I dropped in the 3 arc, I refuse to see an academy arch, that's a lot bad, every Japanese isekai has this same bow is very bad, the MC wastes all the potential of his system