To sum it all up, I find the story very interesting, mostly because I haven't really happened upon this combination before. it's all very fresh and I am looking forward to new chapters.
fusion ability appeared at the 40th chapter so this shows how 40 chapter trial reads aren't enough and it should be back to 60 chapter or more if that is needed to love and understand the plot of a novel so read before saying it's clickbait it's called story development
the novel is worth a try its pretty good.the character is naive but reasonable because of his last life,the lack of interaction,experience, and being isolated in community makes a good reason for lacking in common sense,it will be great in future character development.but the skills and system is to op,you should tone it down. Make your character grow smarter his decision making should sound reasonable,his planning in solving problems,and you should include his future plans for his grow in power ,dont make him a retard in later chapters its a big no no.and the kings garden you should develop it make it a fortress like asgard make a kingdom building genre. so far it is good,good luck on your novel
This really challenged my mind as I was trying to break down exactly what's happening. The suspense is amazing and it just keeps growing. I hope it reaches a climax as satisfying as the build up
to tell you the truth guys this is hidden gem at first but as the chapter goes on the story turn into upside to down because the main character turn on into 'kind'human (demon) saving humans when 'he' the demon turn human races massacring for Her Majesty 'Count demon' and he got betrayed and he full of revenge but instead turning it into revenge story the author made it into back ward story because the mc helps human for fun ? hays many author made story like that but they ended up into failure author ttoo many unnecessary trouble because he can just low key and make another human by bRiding by making human go to his dungeon and even though human didn't come to his dungeon there is still a tower that can help him to get point by many times than at first and too much unnecessary drama ya know this is definitely not recommend reading this novel. but if you bored or with Righteousness attitude then this is for u.
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Just a copy of a different novel almost word for word guy tansmigrates has no talent and becomes blacksmith and forges his own body , plagiarism
Can be summarised as mediocre and disappointingInteresting premise but nothing is done with it... story quickly devolves into isekai cliché about a wannabe hero Use of details in parenthesis is distractingToo many inconsistencies in plot and worldbuildingGrammatical errors almost every paragraph and limited choice of wordsSide characters are somewhat interesting but unfortunately mc is bland and much less fleshed out... makes you wonder who is the focus of the storyThis novel would have been better if it focused on mc's quest for power and answers but was instead wasted on a silly tale about another heroic monster protagonist
I loved how the book started with chasing thief, the concept was amazing and from the very first line caught my attention, I can't wait to read more chapters, I wish you all the best author, your book is amazing ???
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I see authors doing this in their new novel so....This is my first novel so wish me luck.I wrote chapter 1 of this novel during lunch break then it hit me. What if I post it here?
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still readingthis8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 andskipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!