This is not a review but a message for our dear author.It's been a while since your last update. I just want to let you know that I'm still patiently waiting for your return. I miss your story and I hope this won't be abandoned. You're an excellent writer and your story is what I'm excited to read every time it updates. If you're having any difficulties, please take your time. I just want to let you know that there are still a fan of you who is willing to wait for your return. God bless you ??
great story so far! mc def frustrated me a bit in the begining because of his 'idiocy', which got a very good reason layer down the line.spoiler alert:really like the esteregg with gaavah being pride in hebrew (:
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Someone recommended this and I must say it is defintiely super cool. I love Xiao Ming's crude speaking and sarcasm that makes him different from other Xianxia characters I know
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good story, if only the MC was smarter than a 5 y.o kid it would be great.
Although it is still early days, the premise of this novel is intriguing. I like that there are others that came to the land of the gods from others worlds as its unique
Writing Quality: It seems to be quite well written with some grammatical errors, however, they are within the acceptable range and they do not make you want to stop reading.Stability of Updates: Can't say much about that one as I have just begun reading this novel.Story Development: I feel like the pace isn't fast nor slow, as we can the story progressing quite well.Character Design: It's really good (in my opinion) as it seems that the Mc will go under a multitude of changes in the upcoming chapters.World Background: Information is slowly starting to come out as I read the chapters and it seems interesting for the most part.Overall, I'd say that this a novel worth reading.
I don't know what to write but since the author is asking for a review so here. Your book is good. Really good, yea well for me. However, I just don't like harem, hope it's not a harem. Anyways, this 5 start to motivate you more to release more chapters.
I liked the story in the beginning. And the idea of him being the son of a rich family was something different then the normal penniless underdog. But once the whole secret about him was introduced it just got boring. those kinds of forced plot twists just turn me off.
Writting quality:the quality of writting is very catchy and intresting and will keep you intact with the story Story Development:Story development can not be grasp by 1st 5 chapters, but one thing is clear that author knows how to do his work. and sometimes it's part of story to keep the suspense for later time.Character Design:Characters are unique, especially Amon and Valerio. the rest needs a little bit more of honing before we can make judgment.Updating Stability:it's good but not the best.World Background:The world background is very intresting, author has made multiple types of beings and power ranking divided very professionally.