For now, the plot seems pleasant to read. I hope it will continue like this. We can detect that the author tries to mix several systems of magic perfected by authors on webnovel while putting his own personal touch.There is potential, it remains to see the result.
It might be good but the references are annoying
This book has a good pace, interesting. The book is highly recommendable.
just me boldly giving my work a rating hehe└u2060(u2060u2060＾u2060ωu2060＾u2060)u2060」
New story ! Different from the first one, this story’s packed with mystery, especially around the MC’s past was he really an evil warlock or just misunderstood because of his power. The MC’s growth potential is huge, and the relationships with his women are a big focus. All of them has a history with him. Hope you can check it out ?
this writer writing skills and the English... MY GOD! FASCINATING ONE!
The supreme God of the Skaven rat clans from the Warhammer fantasy is called the "Lord of the World Below
I hate harem. This is the only good one, because its takes a longer time with each person.No real complaint about spelling or grammar.There is a lot of potential here, keep it up.
I mainly read this on r/HFY. It's one of my favorite stories, it even managed to sucker me into reading a genre I normally don't (and liking it to boot!). The world building is good, and doesn't stray away from darker topics like slavery. The characters grow naturally and the relationships between characters seem dynamic and natural. All in all it's a great story, and we shall watch this story's career with great interest.
please update the story is so good can't wait
Honestly I like the plot very much, it differ than other novel that I've read, most web novel I encountered center around either rich male lead, gangster boyfriend, mafia born or overpowered lead whose always paired with female character sometimes more than one (harem) that are so in love with them, its a bit annoying. This one on the other hand, the story, the setting was very refreshing and original.
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