MMORPG novels are not easy to write and author is doing a commendable job of doing that. What I loved the most is the way the author is gradually building the world inside the game, with the usage of perfectly balanced words. Raydon's fights with various monsters are very entertaining to read and I have high hopes that we will see many more unique monsters created by the author's brilliant mind. What I loved about Raydon was the fact he went solo to prove to the so-called high-level players that he can manage himself. Good job on that part. Keep up a stable updating rate and I wish you a lot of success author. ✌️
Ok now lemme start off and say I don’t like the mc one bit. Sure the story looks good but when you read it it becomes a ****show. the mc is the most fucking dumbest person I’ve ever read. Like where is this supposed “S rank”? His awareness was so bad he got slashed in the fucking chest by a bandit behind him “he didn’t die somehow” *cough* *cough*plot amour* *cough* cough* why he couldn’t end those bandits was simple awareness? Are you fucking serious,weren’t you supposed to be a S rank in your last life?? but anyway this whole story has little to no potential. I’ve dropped it because I just can’t with this stupid mc. If you still wanna read this story DONT. You will lose your remaining braincells
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace ?
So far this novel is one of the most interesting novel I have read so far. The idea of being reincarnated into a like street fighter is new and exciting. I am very excited what this novel becomes.
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It has shortcomings but idea is unique, and i believe author has the competence to write a good story. Webnovel needs a good sci fi story and this is the one.
Okay..the first chap was so hooking, such a great star. The interactions are so funny, especially the main character.I bet the author is as funny too. Anyways, keep writing author cuz this is going into my library
This review is not a part of review keep remember, although I try some new stuff but this game this is newest of all. Other the opening few errors that are also negligible when we look forward and reach next chapter, the smoothness with which story is described is something I dream of. Char and world are developing with a calculated pace and so the story.Good job author
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Good since i have read, can you answer my shameless question? About his mom , the personality have change or grow in near future? because he will be the mother of the overlord I hope his personality will be strong. after I read he was too emotional yah like a young wife, and his strength is too weak even though I know he will get stronger.and one more is MC righ way, or wrong way? Like devil and saint, good and bad. Because for me the good novels is on personality each character, what's more important is MC its self.
I really like the story so far! Can't wait for the updates. The grammar can be off sometimes but it's understandable as the author's native language isn't English. Keep up the good work though!