It’s less like a story and more like someone telling you how their day went. Just overly bland writing which is frustrating because the premise seems like it has a lot of potential
Have not read it, but reading the synopsis and just tue cover art have me entrances. Hope you go far in this and now i have one more novel that will eiher break my heart or a ling one. Choose one.
So far!
Chapter 33 reviewI like the execution of the story and the use of the everyone’s a lord trope. I also like the limitations given to the MCs super OP ability as well. However the MC has to be the stupidest most uncreative person taken to this world which makes it hard to push through the chapters. I know that the author has said that he is new to the world and doesn’t know how to use his abilities but the way the story is going I don’t see him getting better. ‼️SPOILER‼️For instance he uses the internet to get ideas of what to create in this world, ??u200d♂️ come on now.Despite the flaws I will continue to read to see if this idiot gets smarter and to follow the progression of the story. Overall pretty good job author, keep it up.
well it is almost 30 chapters and it is a very enjoyable isekai novel.......give it a try..(i am not good with reviews)...................
Hello dear author! Your story was very nice! Your writing quality was splendid as it was your mother tongue. Story development was intriguing and it keeps up the thrill. The Character design was very good! I am speechless due to the fleshed out characters you have described. Updating stability was, well it stopped. Author please release new chapters and continue your awesome work. World background was wonderful and I felt that I am in a different world.Author please continue your work and I will stay tuned. Don't be disappointed with the comments of skeptics and toxic individuals. Keep up the good work and stay safe.
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One of my new novels to follow. The development is good as the MC gets stronger as the story progresses. Hipe to read more chapters soon. ......................
Everything is almost told in narrative and summarized. There no character sheet or stats ever shown even though this is vr novel. No real character development or understanding at all. I read to chapter 4 and curious if the rest of the book was like this. So I skimmed up to chapter 10 and there was no difference. At this point I drop it, since most original story had move character development and explanation behind the mc abilities in 2 characters compared to this. No real explanations behind how the vr game system works or about even the mc.
Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10.Posted at 29th chapter.
I had completely read this novel in LNMTL but man... i had already forgot most of contents of it. But yeah, back then I read this novel because it’s had the same author with King of Gods but the plot not far difference with King of God. King of Gods talked about Mc’s special eyes but this novel about mc’s special heart.It’s a bit cliche but endurable. It’s recommended for anyone who likes a regular cultivation novel especially if you are fans of King of Gods. We