It has everything a story needs in my opinion. Good Characters, world-building, an amazing plot, and character development. Not to mention the authors writing style is simply enjoyable.
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The story is good and it need to be continued. The first couple chapters drought me in and I want to see more. Is there any more are similar novel like this ???
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I made my way through the prologue! And here’s my thoughts so far.
There’s definitely plot, and it’s a big one with universes and powerful entities and everything. So if you like the big guys with the big powerfulness, this is pretty good. There’s also lots of terminology, but that’s common in cultivation novel. I easily get bored reading the descriptions of those, but that’s just me. If you’re used to cultivation reading and like cultivation descriptions, the author does a great job. It shows how much thought and effort he placed in it.
There’s a lot of characters and I can see each of their traits. Each of them are interesting.
There are little grammatical errors here and there, but continous writing will improve it. So far, I enjoy it. It’s not my cup of tea unfortunately, but I know its the cup for cultivation lovers.
Give the novel a chance, and I’m sure you’ll find the reading pleasant after a few chapters.
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monster mc fan here.GIVING 5 star review cuz there are so little monster mc here.........................................................................
I liked it at first until the mc got a massive nerf for being OP despite the fact that there is mind magic and even an average level user can read minds and control people (the mc has no defense even with the system). Then the mc has his system stolen, not by a fellow reincarnator but by an ex slave who was cursed to be stuck weak. The mc was taking the brute force path with some magic assistance in a world with mind attacks which he has no defense, power sealing curses which he has no defense, and apparently even power stealing which he has no effective defense. But yeah he’s OP and needs to be nerfed repeatably
Forced plot, cringe anime-esque dialogue every now and then, characters somehow just as strong as the MC for no logical reason, hero complex MCIf those havent turned you away, you’ve got no hope. This novel looks appealing at first with its world building and then it slaps you in the face around chapter 50 with a sudden change to a hero complex MC who starts acting like a complete idiot. Everyone around him suddenly becomes super powerful despite being literal cannon fodder. Everything the MC goes through in terms if challenges are just useless. The MC is not strong mentally or physcially. He can be overwhelmed by two white/blue trial randoms and manipulated but some businessman.Such a disappointment.
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Story started out great... But it keeps on going downhill...The first problem started when almost all villians always escape even when the MC is equiped with very powerful talismans and artifacts... Even the mother one of the top immortals who is very overprotective ignores the escapees after she finds out...The second problem was the Lovespot arc... Even the way the sect dealt with the problem by helping their bottom level immortal and his wasteful grandson is stupid... Since most of the immortals and the sect master are not their family... Makes it very stupid decision and from the top sect... Makes you wonder how they remained the top sect if they make low level entry mistakes like this...Third problem is Tianyi's trauma which doesn't make sense... For him to be scared of all Nascent Soul Cultivators after he was almost killed by a reincarnated and regressor cultivator with memories and techniques of many cultivators doesn't make sense... The trauma could have been of the dragon emperor, regressors or reincarnators or atleast soul cultivators... Him being afraid of Nascent Soul Cultivators after almost being killed by an abnormal does not make sense...Last and the newest is the recent problem... All of a sudden Yushan who has been a role model senior brother and a good sect cultivator at heart is obsessed with Daoyi... He is so focused on her that he is souring relationships with everybody... For a person who valued relationships this came out of left field...The major problem with all these is that they are main points with affect the plot and they are dragging the novel down... Makes it seem like the author forgets about most things he writes therefore ends up contradicting himself...
I don’t know why these type of novels get chosen how can anyone expect that this will be good novel going forward, there is just blatant faceslapping nothing else mc just recieves companies aytime for faceslapping, after reading 30 chapters i don’t think that they will even keep on updating this novel and maybe will just drop it later as it should be.
I'd love to rate this higher, but it seems Webnovel has decided that this book shouldn't be translated, even though it's been second from the top of the list for energy stones for months. I really hope they get it together because the two top stories have been sitting there, surpassed by others that have less than have to votes, while us readers get frustrated.