I actually laugh out loud reading this novel~
High shameless master disciple work there.
and for 140 characters i would add the good translator work! +10 points for giving translation and notes in the end of the champ ;)
At 25 chapters I would say that this is a good novel.
Pros: Cool/Intetesting system
Interesting system for all characters
Cons: Somewhat cringe dialogue
Characters not fully developed and feel hollow
Not the best use of the system imo
Personally not ruthless enough and like I said I feel like he’s not using the system to it’s fullest ability
While I stated a lot if cons, I like the direction that the story is going in and have no big problems with the storyline and the cons are all minor things.
I would recommend.
Ok so I'm going to be shameless and just say I don't really understand ANYTHING THATS GOING ON!!! I was thrown into a story that seems like 5 chapters in on the first chapter, and I'm quite confused and it just sort of dragged and dropped me here. I'm not saying it's bad, in fact I quite like it, there is just so little information I'm super confused about it all! Maybe add a couple lines of backstory in the very first chapter to explain what's going on. I mean I can get the gist of it. But it's just really confusing for me
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First off , good wok author , I have been enjoying your story so far , only some place it confuses me , but thats something minor , at the latest chapter 52 you left me at a cliffhanger.. (angry face) hahaha but its good so far , really got confused in the last 3 chapters but i feel like ill know what has happened when reading the next chap. Hope it comes out aoon!!! Keep Up The Good Work!!
This is a cool twist on a well-known theme. It alternates between suspenseful and really funny. Well written and I appreciate all the interesting details and science-based creativity. Look forward to reading more!
This is one of those rare novels that as soon as you read the first chapter you are captured and no longer free from the burning desire of opening the next page and believe me you just can't stop reading! An advice would be to increase the update frequency due to the immense potential of the Novel.
Really good, I look forward to the continuation!
He falls into my library without hesitation
I really like the concept,
hoping you do not abandon him
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Argh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It really hurts that I can't release so many chapters!
Sigh..................
I hope that someone can still read my 1st time novel.
I need to try my best after all.
my brother writes good novels. I would even say the best novels so here is the review you deserve.
Anyway y'all better read it or you will have a problem with me since I know a few powerful peeps.
The author came to my home and started beating me to make me rate the book
A good novel, although it has some plot holes and some mistakes it is overall a noice novel. I guess i am a bit bias cause it is a novel on ancient Bharat