The grammar is impeccable and the story line is enthralling. This is the first time I'm reading this sort of scifi novel and it's been really good. Continue updating please.
90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.Premise was fine then ,2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf
Author before i read this can you clean me on some stuff Like if there’s romance and harem I would prefer not plz god And if mc smart and evil like fang yuan from reverend insanity plz no good mc
SHAMELESS! Quickly grovel under this Grandfather feets and i might spare you or I'll chop your four limbs and shatter your dantians?????
....and a person became a god like just because the author of the book was caught in an accident two days ago and lost the power to think! .
The story proluge is good but please fix the skill usage like mp cool down and it takes to much time for the development to takes place make the story more details
So he released high level techniques for women only, in the long run they have outperformed all men and when he dies it probably won't change because all the techniques remain targeted. I believe that the history of the world gets more interesting after the death of the MC.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
I find it hard to believe that the MC at peak mana control realm can't suppress with his aura alone the soldiers of wu kingdom in the mist forest who were part of soldiers who hurt meiyi who were just meager qi realm and the commander is probably only at early mana perception realm despite mc being enrage why is that? When a bad guy has higher realm , they can suppress thier enemy with aura alone but the mc don't?
And why is he always late? When the elf queen is starting to battle allaina , seth is already near and he only took action when the queen is nearly dying going for the tree. As if you pause the whole world when you're writing a battle scene only focusing the time on battle. I mean seth should be already moving towards the tree to weaken allaina and yet he seems to just stood like an idiot watching the fight. And this kind of thing happens all the time making some kind of hero saving the day. Seriously! Stop that kind of BS!
It's a very nice novel. I am usually very fed up from work and stuff but this novel keeps me hooked up during my free time and I would recommend it to all the readers to give it a shot.
I'm going to take 10th review~
Thank you for your support for my new book. This is my first time entering a writing competition and I have to say I'm a little nervous. This time, I took genre system harem genre (as always) and modern era. Slightly similar to my previous novel.
This is also the first time I've written a tentacled MC *Cough* (Don't judge me). So anything can happen in this story. I hope you enjoy this book~
Guys don't read this s***t because the author is nerfing the mc by making the excuse to make the mc adapt to his current powers. This is such a bull**** since mc has the innate adaptability skill which makes him adapt to his skills faster but still the mc doesn't upgrade his powers due to his underestimation of his own powers even when his retained xp can amount to directly promote him to level 4 star but still won't progress. You know why that is, it's because this author wants to show his extreme hardships and s***t when the mc has the power to destroy anything he has. I say it's a waste of time to see his hardships when he can destroy his problems which op skills. Sigh I really wanted a good kingdom building novel with op mc.