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typical and sad _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ meaning ~ just like every novel with the same theme and concept, the MC is just meh, so much for two lifetime of experience the attitude does not show it at all pretty much like a copy paste of that other one with the same style, although that one has a slightly better MC
There aren’ t even 10 chapters available right now, but I can already guess how this novel from HideousGrain is going to be. Same Multiverse as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions”. First chapters already with a introduction to this infinitely large planet ”Shima” which already got a small connection with God’s Eyes as Shima got mentioned there two times. Also directly starts with action that is not boring but instead lets you feel it yourself. Has the same power system as “God’s Eyes” and “Primordial Dimensions” but introduces a new mechanic, the spirit soul. Definitely going to read this one!
everyone not from China are stupid.MC has highest talent but is trash cos his 'baclground' is trash...he ranks up to rank 10 within a couple of hours but is trash cos his background is trash (btw it takes years to rank up).also he goes back to China so there will be heavy racism
This book is awesome just like other books the author has written, the plot is great and the grammar is nice and easy to read......... Not good with words but the book is recommendable. I hope you win the contest and if you don't, please do not drop it due to disappointment or whatever.
I can’t believe I struggled all the way to chapter 140 and literally is a different story from that point on. The grammar was already bad but why. you literally got rid of the story and added whatever after that point don’t waste your coins on this novel and this bozo
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I just started reading this and was just so impressed at the quality. First chapter was so much more real than many others of the genre, writing is top notch with no unnecessary background garbage. Now several chapters in and the plot is still developing nicely at a fast pace.
The novel creates a story where the main character is born as an infinite powered god into a royal family. The mc isnt explicity told he has infinite power so he doesnt realize it, at all, even though his status shows he has infinity in every stat including money. The premise of the novel, the mc being infinitely op, which draws people in, is a blatant lie. sure, his status says “infinite” but he has no trouble controlling his strength, speed, or intelligence. he is also immortal but that hasnt even been mentioned. The writing is sub-par. the author uses spaces inbetween letters (ex. a a a a h h h h) which serves no purpose other than to increase the length of the chapter and to annoy the reader. this does not change, the author acknowledges the criticism and ignores it.The world building is great, like every novel with the previous charactersitics. The author places more attention to the world building then they do the actual main character.In my opinion, the author is trying to place the mc low on the progressiom spectrum to allow for more chapters, since authors dont know how to write an mc that doesnt train every couple of chapters, but there isnt any suspense of wonder to the result of the training. his training will be veiwed as pure idiocy later on so how could i care for it? The people he meets are interesting and he isnt sure about being their “master” which makes sense, thats weird, but he doesnt have any specialized connection to ant other character. he is fond of his sister but the most we read of it if a couple paragraphs. I assume the story picks up once he realizes hes op but i dont think it can come back from this redundancy of power scaling.
good averall. wish there were more chapters in the book but yagh. other than that. good background and storyline. author if your reeding. please put more chapters.
