It was so funny. I suggest, Boss Pei to just give up and accept that his games will always be a hit
Needs to work on the grammar in parts
what a good and unique novel... done reading this and all i can say is . it is worth of time reading this
Delete it by puting it In library and removing it them redownload it
Translation Quality & Stability of Updates
I'll be upfront. I'm being paid to do edited mtl, so that's that. However, I also purchase Grammarly Premium. Because what is better than one bot? Two Bots!
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I JUST STARTED TO READ THIS BOOK AND ITS OK... I JUST WISH IT STARTED OFF A LITTLE BETTER LIKE IF THE MC GOT MORE SKILLS AND LET HIM HAVE A BEAST OR GIVE HIM OR WHATEVER?TO AT LEAST SOMETHING TO AT LEAST HELP HIGH RIGHT AWAY BECAUSE HE SO WEAK AND I HOPE THAT HIS (ADOPTED-MOM) AND HIM DONT DIE!!
This is really good guys, give it a chance and read it.
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Really great the first couple hundred chapters but it eventually turns from bad to worse. I'm not sure if the writer/author has been changed or if he has no more motivation in his book but it's starting to get milked. long unnecessary descriptions, Stuff that gets pulled into multiple chapters and as of late more POV changes going up to 6 chapters long about unimportant background characters.The way he writes about morality and stuff also greatly changes which makes me believe the author/writer changed. All in all its massive drop in quality. I've stopped supporting his work, I'm no longer paying coins to read.
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Please continue updating it's really good. ..................................................................................................................
I haven't actually read this fanfiction I'm just reviewing since it doesn't appear normally for me
it's good to see indian authors nowadays writing amazing Stories keep it up bro and don't ever to drop the story.the story is amazing and unique really like to follow the whole story.and yeah please make a discord server for it it will be fun.