Grammar is good and character development is also good. Although Mc made some dumb choices at the start, it was a good story to read. Overall, this novel is a banger.
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Es una excelente historia me cautivó desde el principio.Espero que la sigan publicando y no la dejen abandonada como muchas otras obras eso sería una lastima
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First of all, the title "The Trap Called Equality" really caught my attention. Since there's only a few chapters so far I'm not sure about future stability of updates, but so far its a full five :) The grammar and spelling could be proof-read but overall, it's a pretty nice plot. Good luck and great job!
There are so many things that I want to say but the is the best at the beginning I think it would stay in one plot but too bad that it a cultivator story
I am really am enjoying it so far it’s amazing that you’re not just taking the story beats from the original stories one by one so far that’s the only thing I’m getting from other infinite story books yours is something very unique and I found myself enjoying every bit of it please continue to write such an amazing work.
Straight to the point this novel is trash. I really question peoples taste when this dumpster fire that seems like its a fanfic written by a teen gets above 4 stars. The premise of this novel seems decent in theory (even if it is a rip off of fairy tail and D&D). But the author is straight trash at writing even with a decent idea; the translators doing no favors either cause they are pretty bad too, not unreadable but enough to constantly take you out of the story. Anyways if you feel like reading this novel which is practically 90% exposition I won't stop you, but I don't take responsibility for any brain cells lost.
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My head was already busy understanding what the novel was about but I got more soaked in with the content and plot that the novel had I forgot about time and kept reading. If any of you is doubting that this novel over rated then get the in this Big Bosses Room and Slap You Till The Next Volume. If you disagree with this novels ratings then go jump off a building. I for one am very pleased with this and the development of the novel. The mc has his own reasons as it kept going, the society and hierarchy of the system of the world is corrupted but the view in people's perspective were always "innocent
Just a rewrite of my review without being opinion biased. the MC could use a little more back story early on, leaves a lot of unanswered questions early on, who he is, how he got to where he is etc etc, nothing to big, but could use some work. Not enough lore too know what's what and who's who but detailed enough not to get lost, maybe a prologue chapter that explains the world a bit and how the mc came to be?Excellent writing quality, didn't notice any grammatical errors. could do without the creepy accent though.
Estava tão feliz de achar uma novel que me apaixonei logo de ar podia continuar, e muito boa mesmo. O personagem principal por mais que seja muito forte logo de cara mas e feito de uma forma crível.