reader1803
kingdom building ... nice bro... hope he create monster kingdom and make it more advance than modern cicilization conbining science and magic in technology... also don't just make mc conquer universe in few years... take thousands of year make a civilization for him... that would be nice cause many novel they just make civilization prosper in just few months and years which is just too unrealistic..... "white dragon lord" have one of the best kingdom building..... hope you do great....
Why is the novel not getting updated ?Has the author stopped writingPls someone respond so that i can stop checking everyday Its a very nice and different novel compared to others but i think i will have to drop it now
First of all, I read the sequel on another site and frankly, it's pretty cool, but it shows that the end was botched as possible. I explain myself from chapter 1 to chapter 136 everything moves slowly, then from chapter 137 to 138 there is an ULTRA fast advance which concludes the story in 1 single chapter, good to read, but unsatisfactory at the end
Please continue i really love sandbox games and there are no really good or long novels about building and survival. so continue as i will be here to cheer you on!
I really love this story and truly hope you will someday be up to continuing with this story I hope you are well and life is treating you kindly
FANTASY!! I love fantasy although I know creating a fantasy story is a bit hard but the author hit it on the right spot the background and the character's are grabbing my attention Well done author well done
A very unique novel. The way he progresses the novel is very unique but also very disturbing. All imma say is to be prepared. Even though updating speed is a bit lower than I like, It is still reasonable cause it's an original novel. World Background is also nice. Not exposing much of the world situation before he gets there. Character designing is also nice but you should work on the development abot more. Try not to make it a bit rushed. I don't wanna spoil but you'll understand if you read the novel. Lastly for the Author, good job and pls continue updating it.
This was amazing hope it gets picked no sytem thats all you need to know ingnore this just tryn to get the word count to a acceatable.level so i can post this review
After reading the first 20 chapters of this novel, so far, I enjoyed it. Waiting for more chapters to come. And hoping that this will be picked!
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Very solid novel with good plot and characters, decent grammar, good pace n stable updates.I would 100% recommend it to anyone, you are not going to regret reading this one, its one of the best novels on this platform n deserve wayyyyy more recognition.
This book is great. It took common starting points and concepts and turned them into greatness.The characters are really well portrayed to the point that it's easy to understand who's who just by the way they act and talk. The game is really interesting, passing really well that there's no easy way for OPness, everything must be earned and that is absolutely amazing.The world is extremely interesting in-game and outside of it, making both sides become increasingly enjoyable to read.I hope the author come back to this great series ! And if you're reading this, mate, thanks for writing !
