Story is great so far. Sentence structure is not good and needs some improvement. But most importantly, please update.
hope the locked chapters can be read in other sites . Cant afford to pay for the chapters cause its alot from where im from. Thanks for the reading experience though.
Hello. Anyways I writing here today because I highly recommend you guys reading this amazing book. Throughtoit the story the plot is great as well as the introduction and ending. This book is great and its perfect for kid and **** as well as *****. In short, I highly recommend this amazing and great books and can’t wait for the next one. Good Job, Author. :]
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?Dropped?
gggg
really hope this gets picked up. its a solid book with an interesting premise . MC isn't annoying, supporting cast is fun. let's give it another shot folks!
Is a pretty good read up to 170 the only complaint I have is that some of the events in the story are really confusing to the point where the story is not really clear, also the power of his brother is unreasonable if he was just number one that would have been enough.
Please be selected ?❤️ Jack's top 10 (Mar 2020) ❤️01) Lord of the Mysteries02) Way of the Devil03) I Am the God of Games04) The City of Terror05) The Legendary Mechanic06) I Am A Legendary Boss07) A Sorcerer's Journey08) The First Order09) Reverend Insanity10) The Devil's Cage
Another novel with the same old plot, get every1 inside a VRMMO, make the protagonist be a nobody then send him back in time, still waiting for a novel where the protagonist will be someone great without having knowledge of the future...Anyway with no romance/cute interactions and no life outside the gaming world, this feels like a cultivation novel where the MC cultivates for 1000 years and we read 10k chapters of the same thing happening over and over again, plot isn't very interesting either so...
If your going premium atleast get the chapters edited.I get the part where your first language might not be English so its kind tough to get things done, but mate try using apps for the grammer atleast, there are plenty of them which can fix the endless amount of issues here and make this one more readable.
it is lie ..............................