Story is good, mc is an idiot. Soo many plot holes and inconsistencies. Mc is all about himself one minute next he isn’ and vise versa. Harem is okay, but once again dense mc. It’ okay but would save your fp for better stories
I find the Mc and the story pretty boring.
The vivid descriptions of the battlefield and Zenobia's grief set a powerful tone, contrasting sharply with the humorous and sometimes superficial interactions of students like Vickey, Lily, and Liam. The characters are well-drawn, with distinct personalities and conflicts that promise further development. However, the abrupt shift from the epic fantasy to the contemporary setting might disorient some readers. Despite this, the narrative's creativity and the potential for these worlds to intersect make it an engaging read, laying a strong foundation for an intriguing and multifaceted story.
writing quality is just OK. There are mistakes character design leaves much to be desired. It's like the bare minimum story development is way too slow
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Slowly walking through the cave Hao Ren got this familiar feeling as if he had been there before. Stalactites and stalagmites everywhere should've made it hard to move through the cave, but Hao Ren already knew how to traverse this terrain. Moving closer to the back of the cave Hao Ren saw two lights. One light was a light of darkness coming from the left and bright white light coming from the right. Hao Ren knew what this was. It was Yin and Yang energy. When he got close enough there was a whisper. "Accept the yin and the yang into your being to become recreated." Hao Ren walked forward seeing words written in the yin and yang saying 'Twin Primordial Yin Yang Technique' under this script was the martial skills combined with the technique reading 'The True Dao Art's'. All of this information flooded into Hao Ren's head. The yin and yang energy reconstructed his body. This gave Hao Ren a new understanding of the world.
"The way he stares at people is very uncomfortable. His eyes seemed to be a void of any emotion in them."
Hearing the teacher shouting at him, Big Tree got more indignant.
Since she was so obedient they didn't have to rough handle her, she was asked to sit in the van and stay quiet and any false move and she will put her life in danger, once the van moved, Hillary already was on board the van but they couldn't see her and Ken followed them keeping a safe distance.
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
Kali ini tidak hanya tidak selemah yang dikatakan oleh cerita-cerita itu, ia juga cukup tangguh!
So much to do, so much to see