"Beautiful women are no exception"Author chan just wants to attract readers with this type of lines ??But will this have a lazy and tired protag who just wants to rest in peace? ??
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The story is really rather good, the only rhing i would like is to see improvements in grammar and phrasing. That way the story will be much easier to read and more enjoyable.P.S. i hope the author gets the issue with the account resolved or phone resolved.
Interesting.
Just to activate the stars ☺️
A nice work. I think if you looking something good than you can give it a try. A good mc with a harem wall yes some time he is also OP .just give it a try .
First thing is the cover, if you want to attract more readers, then either get rid of the text, or make the text readable, because you're gonna miss a lot of readers scrolling down quickly on their phones that way.Next is writing quality. The writing quality of this novel is okay, not the best, but not the worst, a solid 4 stars. There are a lot of typos and grammatical errors, but it is still readable and a flow is still established that doesn't break the reader's concentration. (I don't know how you did it! I mean, I can notice all the mistakes, and there are a lot a lot and I mean a lot, but it doesn't take away from the reading experience for some reason? I'm really, really confused right now.)The stability of updates isn't able to be measured right now, so it's a solid 4 stars.After is story development which is a splendid 5 stars. Honestly, the way the story is developing is very engaging, as mentioned above, and I just can't get enough of the story. A really good job author! The only thing I have for the author is that I am waiting for a unique twist to the story, something that I haven't read about before, as all the events that have happened before have already been used by other authors.Character design is also stellar, 5 stars. I love the way the siblings interact and I just can't get enough of their cuteness. It's honestly incredible how you wrote their interactions, not too much, but not too little conversation either, it's just right. Again, like the story development, I am just waiting for the uniqueness in the characters, as their relationship and their designs are again, something that other authors have used already.Finally is world background, a solid four. This is just because the world is really cliche at this point. I am once again waiting for the uniqueness that the author will come up with for the world, as it is just a normal cultivation world right now.Overall, I would have said it was a highly recommended read, except for all the errors in the writing. I definitely recommend you get an editor, or somebody to proofread your chapters as to lessen the mistakes.So, in the end, it's a novel that I would recommend casually, in passing. Not something so great, but that might just be because I place a heavy emphasis on spelling and grammar.Great Job!
Shame that this wasn't picked. Used to be one of the top novels and original son-in-law stories in chinese platform. Story is way better than generic system, super overpowered & no brain MCs in today's trial reads, along with the terrible translation. This story, has an Mc that actually uses his brain and outsmarts enemies stronger than him, rather than just using brute force.
I've loved everything about this book so far but its the same as another book I've been reading when they get the the payed chapters the quality dropped names not capitalised and its not making any sense anymore its such a shame I was really enjoying this book as well, oh well looks like another drop to me
Seems to be a very wish fulfillment type novel. I've read up to ch55 MTL and it feels like every single character and scene exists to make the MC look better.On ch52 there's even a scene where the author praises the MC's amazing observation power for guessing that a table he was going towards had three people because he could see two people sitting down and that one chair had a jacket on it.Also, a lot of the time I felt like I was just reading mob characters excitedly go "he's done for now" even when they had no beef with him. Every character not on MC's side is literally out to get him.Author setup a really grand setting ranging over all of space and different civilizations so maybe you could look forward to that tho.
It is very theoretical ,lengthy and descriptive. I cant find it after 20 chapters. Character development is way too worse.Same case is with everything.
Website : qidian chinaViews : 10.09millionRating : 9.2(1917)Chapters : 1700+Status :??? Word count : 5.43millionauthor level : greatNo of works : 1Comments : 3554Year started : 2012Uhh guys I started writing a novel. If you have time please do check it out. Also suggest me if I should continue it or not.