"Well it is the sewers. What do you expect?" Velma asked.
However, when Sandra gave birth to Jin and Jin was so quiet, everyone in the village - who at that time was hiding underground from another Blue Moon Eclipse in a Cave to the East Bulea Village - all though that Jin didn't survive the coldness. However, to the shock of everyone in the village, Jin survived and he survived strongly, too. If only slightly too quiet.
He had picked up his things and started heading north east.
Way and his wife returned to the Immortal world, although their cultivation were suppressed like crazy, they didn't mind. With their karma of dao, they don't feel anything beside their cultivation going down to the peak of Immortal God. Way brought everyone into his world and picked a new successor for the Mythical Fortune sect.
I Really love how the story has come this far, Xia is a very strong woman and is not afraid to show how independent and determined she is. Mubai is now slowly but surely making her care more and more about him, their relationship is very cute and its slowly increasing their love for each other, thats exactly how relationships should be slow and steady that way they'll love each other more and more hahaa I'm rambling... Sorry ^~^... Overall I love how the story has come so far, keep up the great work byyeee~ <3
I absolute love this novel!It doesn't state the world as some good place or hell but shows the human nature at its most basic...In some chap he asks really good questions that most people think but never would say out loud, for the way the author write this novel and the MC I am an absolute fan! I don't care if the Gramma or some sentences are wrong cause I can look past those and see what a great novel this is! <3
Yoo! This is Iron_Angel_Mk_69 from Terra(Multiverse Travel) the name is still pending by the way. Anyway thanks for helping a brother out. Peace!
It's a good story especially the power system, although I wish that that we will see more concept, like the concept of Growth or the concept of heat or the concept of distance or even the concept Evolution or Mutation. Still great story good job, I have already read more than 700 chapters.
All around a great novel really lovr the story and the characters, also you usee my name in one of your chapters so that deserves 5 stars alone.
Just from the 3 initial description chapters, I can guess that you have it all planned and prepared.At least most of it!So no worries about it getting dropped right!That's what readers expect most from new original novels.It is very Interesting. I didn't find any small mistakes.Good luck!Keep going!
nice plot .... great chara.. .. . perfect world setting . .. it makes me wanna read and keep read ???? good job author . .. will always wait for the next chap ??
Roronoa Zoro from One Piece in a Cultivation World done right. Enough said. Great action. Great story. Interesting development for Haki and Zoro too.