This novel is a pretty decent read but there are some aspects that really bothered me. 1) The dialogue. Listening to kindergarteners and elementary school kids interact would be more interesting than the social interaction in this novel. It's severely lacking in flow and feels very "basic" as another review said. 2) The MC himself. His decisions felt so frustratingly dumb, you'd wonder how the guy is a grown adult. His combat master almost died because MC wasted time asking questions when he was instructed to run away. They had just finished struggling to defeat one wolf and the rest of the pack was coming and MC was asking dumb questions like "Isn't it just some wolves? Why do we have to run?" They only survived from luck. Another time, during the tournament, after catching the enemy who had been shooting at him, he threw the guy away instead of finishing him off. This was during a battle Royale, mind you.In regards to the grammar, I have no complaints and the plot itself looks interesting. Just these two things made the novel difficult to read for me.
I like the story....................................................................................................................................
OMG! This story is sooo great! I must really commend the Author's talent. Good writing style and Good character presentation.Definitely a great read!
Norse Mythology!? Ice Dragon!?Pancakes!? What's not to love about all of the things above? It's a fantastic story and I'm excited for more!
This is actually a good premise, but the execution is just horrible. Either the translator skipped paragraphs, or the author doesn't feel the need to explain or plan anything properly.Examples:-MC transfers 1-3 days of cultivation every day, despite receiving multiple days of cultivation each time. We could say he cannot transfer the cultivation given by the system, but that means he can only transfer 1 day since technically he gave away the previous day's cultivation. - Pick a hard technique because the longer it takes to cultivate the better. Huh? Why?- Since he only gives the pet 1-3 days of cultivation at a time, it should be impossible for his pet to keep up with him, since he gets much more in return. Yet, their levels are synced. - MC reaches bottleneck and needs combat to breakthrough. How much combat? 1 fight...All interactions in the school are just 1 badly done cliché after another. So monotonous and uninspiring that you might as well just skip it. I wish another author copied this theme and did a good job with it.
I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain. like yow the MC really think that he's god himself. I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days. but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
Top notch story MC is perfect story itself is pretty funny and I like it it’s only missing more monkey comedy. like screw humanity I want to monke
anyone know if there's MTL................................ ................................................................................
I really love this story, it's quiet, funny and what made me like it the most are the really cool and well-developed characters.
Not even going to read it since the power of the mc seems like the same thing as from one certain novel. And since I am already reading a novel like this I don’t want to read another one......at least not now...And since I will feel guilty if I just give a review and a bad one at that, without reading, so I read like some chapters and what can I say I was disappointed ? my opinion of course, feel free to give it a try.
The concepts are good (Meaning, I liked it). First of all, I was kind of lost in the first half. The second half made more sense. At times it got a little boring, especially the info dump part of part one. but as I said, the concepts are good and I like cats. ( I have five grown-ass cats in my house.) I wish you good luck ahead.
After an eternity i read a original story on the same level as a top tier translated story. The mc is great and the story plays out really well its a hidden gem