The story is very fast paced, sometimes it is even hard to keep up. The writing is just average, characters are all idiots, they remind you of monkeys who evolved into humans. Plot is somewhat promising but faling to use the potential.
Interesting story. I love the family bond and Hei being the dutiful big bro. I don't know cultivation or generally read it, so this was new to me. The story isn't guns blazing, but the pace is logical and flows well. Well written with interesting characters. Could do really well here.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
