its a comment on the internet not an analytical essay what did you expect
i’ll take your word for it and continue reading i’ll let you know if i like it
That's so disgusting. Gatekeeping? Give it to me!!
1 year later and this novel still has no reviews but it’s still releasing chapters.
The fight scenes are boring, its like a staring contest, mc keeps dragging the fight until he is satisfied like wtf whats with the author, did he really think that i will read all the fcking unnecessary details in the fight scenes like, the mc fighting then suddenly a fcking person butt in then the fight scene turn into a group conversation where evrryone iscursing while someone is explaining like sht.
This seems almost identical to Necromancer: I Am A Disaster. At least at the start...
Is this good?
No words... just simply amazing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Honestly, the story started good, it was a fun read, until around chapter 204. This chapter showed us that the MC is just an emotionless brick. Usually a story is formed through the interactions and connections the characters have between each other and how they grow through them. But this MC is the perfect ninja, no attachment, only training and killing montages. Tbh, a very bland MC.
Love love love!!! There have been a few other returner novels that have been written of a similar quality but either writers block or real life issues have led the writters to leaving the novels dropped or in hiatus without warning or explanation. I hope and pray this novel gets its chance to grow and shine as I desperately want to learn more about Ortus and this new world!
It's not a bad book. Development is slow. The world is well described.
For a first time writing, you tried. Your story development is okay and other things come in place. But you might want to pay keen attention to your dialogues. Its not easy writing, so I must commend you. Good story. Some errors here and there but with some editing and more reading you would improve. Oh and your title, you may want to put a space between the first question mark and the rest.