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Most novels entertain me up until a certain point and although this novel has many cliches it is the only novel I have ever fully read through, for reasons I don’t know myself this is the best novel I’ve ever read both on and off of webnovel, the chapter updated are too slow, every day 2-3 new chapters are released but Im constantly hungry for more, I don’t know why I love this novel so much but please release more, i wish I could read this novel forever
the story is good it hooked me up but the updates is so slow sad...........................................................................
The latest 100 chapters (from chapter 2900 thereabouts), the quality drop so far. Almost 80-90% chapters have repeating paragraphs/pages. Many important scenes were cut/overwritten by these 'repeats'. In the end we barely get 50% content. and the enjoying almost totally gone. I hope webnovel and author fix this really soon.
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I have read around 40 chapters & I am quite satisfied with the development of the plot.. hope it will continue to entertain me like it has done in the previous chapters..
It's not a bad story, but sadly not for me, the plot twist at the end of the first vol was good, but I don't like those type of characters. then again that's taste not quality.
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The pacing in these chapters is a masterclass in controlled escalation. Let me break it down because the author really knows how to play with time. It starts slow—Chi Anyu lying in bed, refusing to come down for dinner. A quiet, almost lazy opening that establishes the domestic tension. Then Xie Junyi brings dumplings up, and the scene lingers. We're given time to sit with the intimacy of that feeding moment, the blowing-on-dumplings detail, the shared spoon. It's deliberately unhurried, almost sensual in its slowness. Then—bam. Night falls. The pacing shifts. Xie Junyi waiting until Chi Anyu sleeps, the leaning in, the whispered confessions. This section moves faster, more feverish, almost breathless. The prose itself seems to quicken. And then morning comes and Xie Junyi is watering plants like nothing happened. The contrast between that nighttime intensity and the next morning's calm is jarring in the best way. But the real pacing genius is Qi You's entrance. After all that heavy, intimate tension between the two leads, we get this almost comedic moment—someone showing up in a dress, sweating in the sun, waving frantically at a locked gate. It's a release valve, but it also raises the stakes. Because now there's a third person who knows something is wrong, who was blocked, who is physically present at the edge of this poisonous relationship. The chapter ends with Qi You sitting in Chi Anyu's room, legs wide open, dress getting in the way, finally relaxed—and that's where the tension actually peaks. Because we know Xie Junyi is downstairs, or around somewhere, and this conversation is about to get complicated. The author doesn't give us a cliffhanger with words. They give us one with atmosphere.
what a lovely story ..i can wait to read for the next chapter .
thank you Author, our thea is getting back in this new battle scene, I can't just wait for thea's appearance..thank you thank you Author, Am so happy for thea return ............
