"Eh? Oh, okay." (YX)
Fiery Wheel...
When they returned to the inn, Robin immediately pushed Christian over to Keith and hurried Jasmine into her room. Removing the mask, she had Jasmine hand it back to Quinn, who re-absorbed it into himself.
Ares formed the Dark Fire domain, while Eve formed the Water domain.
"ah.. to think invisible dragon might die like this pointlesslyy..
I really like this story and wanted to give it the deserved 5 star review. ?
So far the mc has barely shown a depiction of pride he has been trying lay low until caught and while I like that he isn't one to make stupid decisions off one person saying something him letting people that clearly hate him benefit from him is stupid. The villian tag is blatantly wrong which personally isn't bad if you go in not expecting one. The story development isn't bad but I wish I knew more of what was going on at this point all I know is that he plans to abandon his family so he's not tied into that stuff why no clue from what I've read it seems he would benefit more from staying with them and it's hard to understand his pov if nothing is explained. Also it seems a big part of the story is them dying and starting over but so far I'm not sure if that's gonna happen.....
The Tree Life Is For ME!Great story go on and give it a read you wont be dissapointed in it! :DLoving the fast updates as well and the main character the other chars are interesting and well and the pacing is good so give it a go my friends :DKEKEKEKEKEKKEKEKEKEKEKEKKEKEKEKEKKEKEKEKEKEKEKE
Okay, the updates in order make no sense. You went back and edited your story and it caused the chapters to go from talking to a teacher to fighting moonlight with a summon that we never read about.
I want more chapter more.... And i cannot say anything about the novel because it only started with few chapters....................................,........................., .................................,........................., .................................,........................., .................................,........................., .................................,........................., .................................,........................., ................................,........................., .................................,.........................,
This story is great so far, gives a decent amout of world background in first few chapters. Mc is not overly powerful, which leaves the option to continually improve, which will keep the story interesting. Im looking forward to how it continues. I hope the chapters keep coming
It's a story about a run away bride...but wait it isn'tit was all apart of the plan and creates the chaotic mystery that set up the future of the story,a brilliant twist on a cliche opening and it keeps me hooked hoping to learn more about the real reason for the mystery...