in one word amazing. one of the rare novels that gets better and better as times goes on and the ONLY novel that makes me spend real money on this website. if you liked lord of the mysteries, you might like this even better since it's slightly more fast paced. I remember having things to nitpick about in the first 100 chapters, but it has been an amazing ride where the only thing I look forward to now is new chapters daily.kudos author
ahhh... this wouldve become so good if after his vampire evolution he wouldve gained a normal height. But this author decided to keep him as tall as a child, destroying the possible hint of romance that coulve accentuated the story and bond between the characters. Such a bad choice even though the story itself was good in spite of the bad translation (?) or just the bad use of pronouns.
I am so in love with these characters. Rowan is soooooo likeable. I love how he is a mix of unsure and fiesty. It is so adorable when he and Wren get together. Talk about chemistry. Great job author making a believable romance that has both sexiness and substance. I will confess…I LOVE Lysander. I know he’s a secondary character, but I sweat everytime he is in a chapter. PLEASE give me more Lysander. I’d even read a whole story featuring him and Nicasi. Hint, hint.
I liked the first 40 chapters. It was pretty chill like a slice of life story. I hope we get the rest of the chapters
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I love this story it is really interesting, I hope the novelist, doesn't stop writing this is pure comedy.keep up the good work, hope your book get contracted ??
the story is promising, reading the story was like a whole roller coaster ride which gave a different vibe and feelings to the person who read the novel, I really like it, I'm hoping for more chapters 5/5
So I'll just summarize everything here.1. Remember to stick to only one tense. It takes practice, and I still make tense shifts by mistake.2. Make characters consistent.3. Learn the art of description-- telling and showing. There are lots of guides in the internet.And above everything else!Never stop writing! Just don't stop writing. Once you stop, you really won't improve, so Don't. Stop. Writing.That's all~!
The quality of the writing is well done. You get what it means most of the time. The Stability of the chapters is what seems like at least one chapter week, it depends on the author's mood I presume, or his workplace. The Story Development is good and there is folklore within it. It is interesting to see some lore, you know? The Character Design I would say is the best thing so far. The reason why that is is that it gives you good and exact details on the character or his/her face. You can actually imagine her/his facial expressions! Moving on to World Background. It is pretty good, it ain't bad, nor good, its a-ok. It doesn't give TO much info nor to vague, just perfect, like the movies in a sense.
This "synopsis" will kill charm of this novel. This novel is pleasent supprise for me. After years of reading webnovels I could guss basic story of novel just by reading title or synopsis. But this one suprise me by fresh feeling while reading .let me tell you first few chapters is very let down but after that you will never knew how your time spent until you need to pay 40 th chapter. I strongly suggest this novel to all readers. wish you a happy reading.
A writer myself, I have to say this novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I though they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would continue to read.
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805