Rating: 3.8 starWriting quality: 5 starNothing to talk about, very good written, especially the prologue. Stability of updating: 5 starActually wanted to give 1 star, but since author showed 0 chapter/week means he did what he promised.Story development: 4 starThe story is very well developed. We get information about the world slowly, not too much and not too little. It’s just enough making the story easy to follow.Character design: 1 starThis is the point which destroyed the whole story. It’s fine to make main character coward, ignorance or pushover etc. But it’s not fine to make main character stupid or a liar. World background: 4 starVery well done on the world building. Very creative and promising.
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Guess my review is going to get deleted again, along with everyone else who doesn’t rate the novel high.The novel has so many plot holes and is written by an author who clearly has no idea what an MMO is. Hunters don’t need dexterity? Main stat is strength? Need to put points in loyalty just to make their summons work?Also, all the people reviewing the novel saying how investigative the MC is...the only reason the MC is like that because he lacks all common sense. The MC will go, “Wow, a crossbow?” even though he is playing a ranged class. It’s all just the author padding words.This novel is complete garbage, and all bad reviews being deleted just further proves that.
Ok. First of all, I don't want to offend the author with this review. Secondly, I'm going to review the first 20 chapters. With that said I'm implying that the book will surely improve in future chapters, as the author gets experience but judging by the first 20 Ch I have to say I didn't like this. First, the fact that the MC wants at all costs become a pro player is stupid, at least in my opinion. I don't think some people would really want to try a path with no certainties in a situation where he has no money and doesn't know how to survive. Aside from that, the story itself is nothing new. Aside from the fact that the MC chose a difficult race, there is nothing innovative here. The world-building seems pretty standard, again nothing new. The fact that the MC meets the weapon trainer and the mage "trainer" at the beginning already points to where the author wants to go, but it is another clichè, even the I Got the Masters is a whole clichè. As for the plot itself, where does it lead? What is it that makes it different from other books? Then, the writing quality. Ok, there are not many grammatical errors, yet the MC talks in a weird way with the NPCs, in a totally different way from real life and different compared to how he talks IRL. Then, the fights: essentially Here is the enemy, here is the enemy status, here is a couple of skills, enemy felled. It is rather simple. Notice: This is just my personal opinion. I'm by no means trying to offend or saying my words are absolute. This is an opinion. Feel free to disagree and to read.
I find one of the most annoying, and also immersion breaking, parts of this book is how inside a video game they can somehow get drunk. And not only are they drunk, but real world tolerance affects how much they can drink. One character or another, without logging out, drinks inside the game, gets drunk, and him being drunk becomes a major plot point several times per arc.
If only it was updated frequently it would be the best novel by far
Read the raws, really fun fights and situations waiting for us. Just hate that we have to wait. Hope they translate really fast. Do u hear me qidian i am talking to you?
After reading for 64 ch its realy boring,so many info dump about cultivation about tis and tat. Thisisn't the intellectual scheming type of novel either. There is none of that. The MC spends all his days practicing Taiji fist and still sucks at it (keep in mind he's been doing it since he was like 3 years old, for 4-5 years). No adventures, nothing. Just the MC trying to learn some martial arts (Ignis skill) that's basically Level 1, and not making much progress. If this is the rate of power progression then how long do we have to wait until the MC is able to accomplish anything significant? How long until anything actually interesting happens?
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he was introduced as billions of years old, cold aloof god. but he talks way to much, and speaks many unnecessary things, 15 chapters in his 'cold' charecter is already breaking, and the story is already progressing to fast, I would be surprised is the emperor of the kingdom came down next chapter. two peerless beauties were generated out of no where,, just cause no doubt for smut reason which also brings the story down a bit. but the main problems as I said are. cold personality breaking, story moving way too quickly, and too much unessarcary speech on the mcs part. oh and too many random long drawn out info dumps.
A dreadfully lukewarm novel I don't have the patience to get through. If this novel was a food, it'd be apple skin (but without any nutrition).As per usual with Webnovel, the characters, plot and world building are shallower than a kiddie pool. The plot is just pointless since he's cultivating martial arts even though he's eventually just going to cultivate immortal cultivation in the future. Why did the author pick this premise? It'd be fine if he made it even slightly interesting but this is just a drag.Although there is immortal cultivation in this world, so far most of the novel has been wuxia which really perplexes me because it doesn't seem like the author is doing anything unique with it, this is more directionless, pointless and vain than the average sign in novel. 0.5/5.
This is my frist time commenting on a webnovel because this book annoys me the most. I binge read this novel because of the unique system and now I regret it. Sigh. Please add a harem tag. Seriously. MCs becomes the typical MC and every time a beautiful woman appears he helps them instead of sticking to the plot. And out of nowhere, his childhood sweetheart suddenly has a divine physique and the ghost lady suddenly has a royal bloodline. The strong captain "suddenly" has a strong interest in him so he can go to that island and get the inheritance. Are the women here just a tool to push the plot? How annoying.