~~~~~~~~I'm the second review. And I dont know what to say yet, since I haven't started reading~~~~~~~~~~~
Wow! Sci-Fi! I loved science, but here is wondrous! But I'm into mystery and horror, this story can give someone interest your taste. It was like an Action Movies, great wars are difficult to write most in the battles. But hey, who knows that you can write the most detailed battle ever? This is a great story author! Keep up the good work! :)
Okay, this is the coolest concept ever, the use of the trading card game in the actual plot of his missing girlfriend! But what is the best part is the story is so well done too, the inner dialogue feels so real!
I have yet to read it, but I already want to thank author for the synapsis. The toxicity of the [mindsets] is really disgusting at times, it makes people look like some beasts. Outdated ways of thinking that silently harm people while claiming all credit for good things. I know a lot of them from all the novels I read, and I hated them to the point of writing a novel myself. Thank you for doing it for me ?
Grammar quality is to bad for me to really want to read it, no idea if it gets better. The idea behind it is good though.
I am rating this novel as 3.5 stars soley because of the fantastic concepts, world building, and character depth. That being said... this novel will likely never be completed. The author is terrible with updates. Do not ever believe their 'powerstones for extra chapters BS'. It never happens. If this novel were ever completed and in a book store (and edited of course) I would buy it in a heartbeat.
It's not like all the other novels with annoying young masters. Also everyone including the MC aren't as stupid as beans. And he won't just go affending everyone, everyday and everywhere like an idiot
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This is one of those rare occasions where I can appreciate both the story AND the author!The story itself was fairly linear to start, but that quickly changed...Why did it change?I'm glad you asked!BlueLighttotheWest genuinely cares about the readers and listens to the comments. He also responds to the comments which is a nice change of pace!Thanks to this ****** fact, a good stort became a great one!So for those of you who are judging this novel by the first bit of the story, please take me at my word and trust that this story gets better and better as it goes on.So then, the by the numbers review:-Writing Quality: 4/5. For those of you doubting this, just keep reading. Our author is growing along with our MC!-Stability of Updates: 4/5. Life happens and we're only human. Sh*t happens! When life doesn't give the author flu-shaped lemons, the chapters keep pouring in!-Story Development: 5/5. I gave a 5 for two reasons; the first being the exceedingly fast pace at which the MC and story escalates, as well as the fact that BlueLighttotheWest listens and has enhanced the plot as he learns more about writing this sort of novel and it continues to grow magnificently!-Character Design: 5/5. This one should be obvious to the actual readers, but for those who haven't had the chance yet, our MC is unique and has great depth, not to mention the potential for so much development! He literally starts as a baby! The only way to go is up!-World Background: 4/5. The missing star is only the fauly of this type of story. The world changes very quickly and there is little time to stop and smell the roses, so to speak. Otherwise, the imagery is well done and the universe is pretty well organized.So overall, 4/5 stars. Though to be honest, the story is only increasing in readability. There was one moment where I started to feel the story was about to go downhill. Immediately after having that thought, there was an shift in the environment which immediately brought me back in.For those that felt this review was too long and didn't read it and just skipped to the end etc...Read this. It's great. :)
Five star of rating because I like it!!!! A weakling mc due to his modern mindset while oblivious on a lot of stuff... Tons of coincidence that indirectly involve him while mc himself just walk around as low key guy or just 'I'm late, so gotta rush in much two sword flight'... Lots of misunderstanding on mc which is funny since mc just trying to make himself not get caught as transmigration cliche mc but all those guy and old monster thought he create a decade of detail subtle plan....
A very good novel. I just hope that the MC won't start a harem and will become more protective of his friend and fiance. Please don't make him a idiot that let's his enemy's live even after they cross the line.Keep it up I will surtenly support this novel in the future.
i really liked the plot and read 89 chapters in 2 days, sadly this has been dropped! wish the author will have a change of mind or just one day going to surprise all of us with a mass release ??