This is an amazing story that has thoroughly impressed me so far. Normally system novels or hit or miss to me, especially the ones where the system can control the main character through missions. But this one so far at least seems to have a reason for giving the missions that it has, and that the missions actually serve a purpose. We'll have to find out about that late if it is true. Looking forward to see how the story progress.
Love the novel so far and where it's going, but i have a question. Was it dropped?
good start pls continue...The best thing is at least you are not discriminating against based on caste or religion or areas.
The storyline is good. However, what gets me is the use of present tense and past tense. I thought I could just overlook it, but it happens continuously, and I have read more than 100 chapters. Here, I am reading and correcting every present tense that should be past tense. I do not actually know if I can still read this just because of that. The storyline practically follows the generic 'i am going against the heavens because dah dah dah' so I mean I am not missing out if i discontinue reading but man I put effort into reading this. Ace is likable, but I found his growth and mindset development weird, and he trusts too easily, but I guess that is just me. I don't know, man. Author san for what you created, you are amazing as I do not have the ability to create a whole new world for readers to emerse themselves into, but please get an editor.
Great story and character design so far,i hope it ll not turn to some cliche story
"Oh ok, and then i have to create the hero right?"
"Lord Light, what creature will you create this time?" Lilith asked.
"Here we are, the purify room," said Nurseman, i mean Nurse person.
Scarlett watched from the river until the bloody clothes was swallowed by the waters.
"Thank you, mister!" Wyn called enthusiastically as he grabbed his bag and handed the elderly man a few coins. Unable to bear the temptation any longer, he pulled out a slice and started munching on it. The delicious taste invaded his taste buds, and he couldn't help but close his eyes blissfully as he took the first bite.
Aya: Oh please! Like I'd hurt something so cute!
as I looked around I saw~