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I love this novel!!!Well-written and the strong protagonist is like none otherDefinitely recommending this novel
Don't let us down am looking forward to this st ory
The personality of the MC is great. Funny when he probably shouldn’t be, but dead serious when it come to family. His bad luck is hilarious.
"Taming the Arrogant CEO" is a thrilling romance that delves into the complexities of love, power, and personal transformation. The dynamic between the strong-willed heroine and the arrogant CEO creates intense chemistry, while the plot keeps you hooked with twists and emotional depth. If you're a fan of captivating, character-driven love stories, this novel is a must-read. Don't miss out on this exciting journey — dive into "secret of seduction" and experience the sparks fly!
I’m a dude, never read yuri before… but this novel is honestly a heck ton of fun to read
Let's pretend that this isn't the author reviewing their own book
Hi, everyone. Well, I waited until I reached 100 chapters to have time to think about what to say in this review (And it didn't work. I still don't know what to say. But I'll try).I will use Webnovel's own system to try to give my view on what I think of this story so far (as a writer, since I don't have the perspective of a reader). So, if you have given the story a chance and disagree with something I say, feel free to share your opinion politely, please.Writing Quality: Incredible, at first I was already unsure of what to say.Well, I'm not sure, but I think it's more than evident to you that I translate the chapters, right? So, although I currently use spell checkers, where most of the errors found are character names, the word "mana" or words like Ancient written with a capital letter, maybe a lack of commas sometimes too, I can't say how my writing quality in English (in the case of the translation) would be categorized.Story Development: In my view, this started happening now. Not because it's too dragged out, so much so that it took 100 chapters for something to happen, but because the chapters before 81 didn't have an average word count, like the 2,000 I have now, and, something I noticed a while ago, I think I spent too much time and words describing things, even though it could have been done more quickly (I'm trying to reduce that now, although describing is something I enjoy doing).Dialogues are a separate issue, I think I do have a problem writing dialogues. I'm trying to improve, and I don't know if there's anything else I can say about it.I believe that the coherence and consistency, both of the characters and the world, are okay so far, as they are all under construction.As for the pacing, it falls into the same "problem" I mentioned earlier about the chapters before 81. A lot happened in them, many important things. However, at least for me, I have the feeling when rereading everything that the same things could have been written with fewer chapters.Oh, and don't get me wrong. I'm not saying that the chapters from 81 onwards don't have these same problems, just that, in my opinion, they have been reduced.Character Design: As far as I remember, it's okay too. I don't keep reinforcing the physical appearance of the characters all the time, but I believe I described enough in their first appearances. As for the personalities, except for Hye, I think few have had enough time to show theirs.Update Stability: This is indeed a problem. For example, since it's the hundredth chapter, I wanted to make it a bit longer than the others, so it ended up with 3,500 words, I think. But it should have been even longer. The problem is that after the first thousand words, it takes me a long time to write the rest. If I write a thousand words in almost 1 hour, I only reach 2,000 after at least 4 hours (A time that my phone can't stay charged...), that is if I don't have to finish the next day because I can't think of the ending (Which happened with chapter 100. I started it on Saturday and finished it only on Sunday night). I will try to write extra chapters and save them to post even when I can't finish writing the chapters, but I think that will take a while still.World Setting: I used to think this was also a problem, so much so that, if you notice, I don't describe much the environments outside the dungeons and that are actually real places, because I've never been there. But now, I will try to pay more attention to this, either through photos or other means, I will try to find ways to describe these places more accurately from now on.To conclude, I wanted to let you know that the synopsis does not refer to the protagonist, but to a character who appeared in chapters 97 and 98 (the two that, honestly, I enjoyed writing the most so far).I think that's it. If I forgot something, it's because I'm sleepy (it's 4 in the morning now, and I finished chapter 100 a little earlier). Thank you for reading this and, if you decide to give this story a chance or have already done so, thank you as well.
nice.....................................
This book is great from the first and last chapter, It does not explain anything so much. like, not using in-depth sentences to every paragraph, making it not so boring to read at all. Also the cliffhanger and mystery is also well planned, need more chapter?
I really like this story and it's pacing is really good and Kodesh is my favourite character
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
Thanks for the story, interesting to start out and see where it goes.
