I understand that it’s mainly just a repeat novel but as far as quality goes it’s actually really good but that might just be my bias towards agriculture based novels.
It is a good one the only problem is updating stability for a new novel updating 3-7 chapter a day is the norm but we'll you rule just increase the updating stability
good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876
Is it wrong for me to state facts? The fact I'm stating is that this novel is good. Really good , I'm not lying , slap me headless until thunder strikes , this novel is a good read.
Honestly this could have been perhaps a hidden gem if it wasn't for the fact that it's a cultivation novel. Magic, system and cultivation, three settings that contradict each other in a way that it makes it hard for authors to design a power system that feels impactful, fair and somewhat balanced. In this novel you could hardly feel the 'magic' element, simply replace 'magic spells' with 'martial arts', 'magic' with cultivation and 'academy' with sect and you get yourself a generic cultivation novel where the more our Mc progresses in his story the weaker he actually gets (not technically) , also I don't see the point of the system, it just does everything for our Mc, people in the reviews call him 'smart', 'unique' ... But the system literally gives him everything from randomly invited students that are flowing with talents to mythical-grade magical roots and anything else he happens to need at the convenient time, at this point I'm asking why not make him build the 'academy' from scratch with the help of his sugar daddy (the system)? Or perhaps make him actually care for the 'academy'?. You know, whatever, moving on
Whats with the pacing in this novel? Everything happens so suddenly and randomly without any prior development or foreshadowing that any event in this novel whether it's an important side character backstory arc or a simple info dump immediately loses its weight before it even starts. That's again another problem with these type of novels smh
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I don't know what to write here but I think you people should read this
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Interesting story progress, moderate pace of story, and characters look good so far. Keep up with the good work, and also don't forget to update more often.
Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.
Question… is invayne really human?