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Roronoa Zoro from One Piece in a Cultivation World done right. Enough said. Great action. Great story. Interesting development for Haki and Zoro too.
So far so good, at chapter 5 you can already feel the arrival of another Chu and Chen Feng from MGA and Everlasting.It's got the wuxia flavour of a kid who magically gets has some more happen to him and then he becomes a murdering psycho with incredible cultivation speed and "great" morals.
Very fluffy. The wife is hinted to be from the future and their interactions are funny and cute. But there isn’t much else to be honest. Good to waste time but definitely not a good pick
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Marvellous story.... the plot is unique with the protagonist Kayden being a hybrid of two races I didn't think i would ever see.The story flows smoothly, the characters are intriguing and the world building as well as English and Grammar paint a fantastical picture... Fantastic story author, you have my vote!
Author is obsess with making the MC retardedly act like their in game counter parts.you know the game is has no happy ending yet you insist they act like what they did in the game. When its blatantly obvious that is not helpful for their goals.You are just copying tropes and not thinkg if its makes sense in your novel. Think more rathar than blindly copying.
this book kept me captivated in one go... the author did a great job in describing the characters, places and every other thing. I read till chapter 5 n can't wait to read more?
This story was great the plot and specially it's characters. And for me, I really like it so much that I will recommend it to others for them to read. I'm not being bias here, it just that it get to my heart and my mind. I wish you will give us some wonderful work in the future. Thank you!!! I really love it. Fantastic and magnificent, I think this words can describe how perfect your story is. Even though that I'm more on, in an action story with a touch of fantasy, I really really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable, also I really like it, thank so much
The story isn't amazing by any stretch of the imagination, and the issue with Futa's can be a real turn of for some readers. It doesn't bother me as much as other viewers but I will still agree that a plot detail this divisive should have been disclaimed before hand, but I can also understand if the idea of Futanari popped up and the writer just went with it as don't believe it was a planned idea from the start. However if your just looking for a trashy erotic power fantasy story to get your rocks off, and don't mind its dark tones I'd say this story is for you.
This is an amazing story! I am really hooked from the begining. I want the MC to grow and gain levels. I love the imagery from the MC hatching. I can just see a snake feeling the same! And it just gets better from there!
Enjoy the series, this is an alternate universe of earth, by the way, you'll see a lot of things that are different from our worlds, such as having 'Abilities' and the various jobs that come with the abilities, hope you all Enjoy...*Cough* Shameless 5 star from the author
