[Chemistry Skill Unlocked!]
"Fi?"
"Ah, that's an affinity ball isn't it?" (Rose)
She looked at me closely, I can feel her gaze scanning every part of me.
Everyone nodded their head in the proposal in this matter.
So was this dropped? I miss the time when this was still being translated by a group before webnovel took the rights. At least that group was able to update regularly.
The novel is what it is advertised as; a slow passed cultivation novel.
At first you think that the story is bit slow and the description is provided by the author seems bit too much but after some chapters you see the same at everything.in every scenario when the people are bad mouthing the female lead there are same feeling in each and every chapter you get bored easily....The male lead always harass the female lead but she doesn't do anything even her thoughts are not clearly described by the author....
Author trying to give everyone carpal tunnel!!! Seriously the Storyline is growing well and all the characters are blending beautifully!
not my kind of book, but the writing is pretty good
more to put in and my review we change if things get more exciting
Pros: I think your storytelling is great. The way you let the facts sink in is also great. But for a Naruto fan, some parts of the explanation may feel boring. Having watched Naruto myself years ago, I think the way you have darkened the universe is something many old Naruto fans would want.Cons: First of all, even if you mentioned somewhere in the synopsis or the review that it isn't a fanfic, it gives a fanfic vive. I don't know about the future chapters but for now, the pacing of the story is quite slow. I know that the words for the details to sink and to give info just in case someone with zero knowledge of Naruto reads it; it is also important to minimise those words to a bare minimum so that it feels like the story is progressing quickly. If you planned the slow pacing, I can't say much about it.