Our MC is a narcissist, who has a fetish for affairs with women. He is a prison warden, and then karma hits. Lo and behold he transmigrated into a gigglo's body about to be executed. It has a decent plot line, but the MC has split personality disorder now. It distracts the reader and at times makes one sigh.
La historia empieza bie y luego todo se arruina en picado, el MC es prácticamente inútil y aunque parece inteligente en realidad es más como experiencia más hacerse el listo hasta sus subordinados lo traicionan y sus concubinas, la historia de volvió muy mala
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The only thing lacking is stability of updates. Of course I understand that good stories need time yet I will give 4.8....................................
Well somehow so good tho it remain me of that "superstar" but pls dont be racist like that one well im hoping for more interesting progress Overall 4/5
I'm still waiting for additional chapters of this nice book, which has a fascinating and original plot. Keep up the excellent work! will advocate for readers
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You build the characters, readers is loving this novel, and now changing their name will hit you hard, thumbs down... Like **** roger? Stacy? TF with those name change.
I feel like there are gaps missing between each chapter I'm missing out on. I don't like how the story changes perspective from MC to another mid-chapter too often. I think there is a need for a more descriptive background for the main characters and side characters. Overall good story.
one of the greatest novels if seen, hope you can add more chapters to this great novel??????????????and for the haters that think this novel is bad and I'm wrong you just have no taste in good things.(Explains why you don't have a girlfriend?)
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This story is a wild adventure of epic! With a MC that makes you feel as if you’re sitting on your best friend’s couch, watching him play games late at night and a complex structure that engulfs the reader in its world, you won’t want to put it down. It’s evident the author has put a painstaking amount of research into video games, monsters, VR and Asian culture. This is a story that places you in the middle of a death game and you aren’t sure if you’ll survive the next boss fight. Extremely well written and deserving of your read.